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Title: Teething Troubles	06 Jun 2009 8:05 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed)	[Report This]

Title: Teething Troubles	27 Oct 2006 8:46 am
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Title: Teething Troubles	23 Oct 2006 5:34 am
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous)	[Report This]

Please continue. I am saddened that I have no more to read. PLease contiue this story and update very soon, as I would really lik to know wht happens. I really like this piece. Thanks

Title: Teething Troubles	16 Aug 2006 12:44 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)	[Report This]

Oh, that part about pretending to be a cat was so cute. I love toddlers at that age, right before they can talk. So sweet, just barely able to pretend - I bet Harry makes a very darling toddler.

Great job trying to capture the feeling of Harry looking at the pictures. He remembers some, but again, at that age it is so hard to understand anything adults are saying. Love how Harry thinks of Snape as the batman. "The batman, the batman" - how scary!

I really like this story, and I;m looking forward to reading more.

Title: Teething Troubles	09 Aug 2006 12:03 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)	[Report This]

haha I love how attatched Harry is to Hermione and the "magic book" and how he had no intention of letting them go. Such a precious baby, thinking that.

I loved, loved this line: He was frustrated when his words didn’t come out as well as they could have, but then again he did have Cheep-Cheep in his mouth. LOL! That was great. XD And oh man, when Snape demanded Harry take it out and then Harry's reasoning/thinking was that Cheep-Cheep ENJOYED being in his mouth! XD This is too cute! I really like how quick Hermione is to know the name of Harry's special toy already. Nice in-character trait there.

I love how Snape's trying so hard to do one thing, in his no-fun manner and Harry's just pretending to be a cat! XD and not interested at all at what Snape wants him to be interested in.

You are missing a d here: Why couldn’t he make anyone understand that Cheep-Cheep like it in his mouth and liked playing ‘Cat’ with him?

Hehe, I love Snape's attitude. Silly man, I love the way Harry's being so intent on what he wants. I love how he put the stuffed bird down his jumper. Silly baby. I love how he hoped that Snape would cuddle him. I loved the descriptions of Snape from Harry's POV as Snape carried him. I loved this line: the beloved bird which he desperately needed to chew. Haha I guess I loved a lot of things. XD

Haha. :) Great, great chapter and really nice ending too. It was sad, but reflectful. Overall I'm really enjoying this story. Beautiful work. :) I think that the only thing I can think of to improve would be more descriptions earlier on. As I was reading I woul find myself curious and wondering what exactly Harry looked like, what he was wearing and other things like that, other people and the surroundings. Iit was a little choppy when Snape had the photo album and it seemed like Hermione hadn't come back yet. I'll assume that the scene change was supposed to be when that happened but I don't think that the story around it lead enough to that conclusion.

Fantastic story!

(which took a lot more energy than he would have like seen as Harry seemed determined to cling to him)

‘Come on Potter,’ he said, we haven’t got all day.’

Title: Teething Troubles	09 Aug 2006 6:17 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed)	[Report This]

Ah this is such a cute baby story. I hope you update soon. I love how Harry talks to everyone. Oh and I like how you have the fifteen year old Harry sort of in the back of his mind. I can't wait to read more!