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Reviews For Child's Play
I'm still loving this fic! -P.G.
First you've got the weird new magical creature. A seahorse in a waistcoat! Heh. Nice image, and I nearly spat out my soda when he spoke to Ron. (Some might say too much, but not me. Startling, yes... too much, not really.) Snape's sudden decision to do something about the Pickle family was also good and also quite unexpected. Good on him for trying something dangerous on behalf of a family he didn't even know very well... Finally, you have found a rare reader in me, because I'm honestly not all that concerned with Harry at this point. I'm much more interested in what is going on with Severus and Lucius and the general nature of the spell rather than on how Severus and Harry will become closer - because the latter is more or less a given. I could write that part *for* you, and so could anyone else who's read one or two of these. What's most interesting are the new elements you've introduced and how you handle *them*. Again, just my two knuts, as they say. ;) You've got me v. intrigued. -K |
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