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Title: The Catalyst 31 Aug 2009 12:01 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Is Sir Dapper going to make a reappearance? If he is, then it wasn't too much, but if that is the last we'll see of him, then it was. It could be phrased a bit smoother, but it wasn't by any means bad writing.

    I'm still loving this fic!

    -P.G.
Title: The Catalyst 15 May 2009 5:09 pm
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    Coldy!!! *hysterically giggles*
Title: The Catalyst 04 Sep 2007 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Elizabeth (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You capture Lucius well, but yes, Sir Dapper the seahorse was too much, I found it, as Fred and George would say, dim-witted. NO OFFENCE TO YOU! I just found it realy childish and pointless, like something you'd find in a small children's book. Sorry, I just diddn't like it. Other than that GOOD JOB!
Title: The Catalyst 17 Feb 2007 8:49 pm
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Reeeally good. Up until this point, the story has been more or less similar to many other de-ageing stories I've seen. But now...

    First you've got the weird new magical creature. A seahorse in a waistcoat! Heh. Nice image, and I nearly spat out my soda when he spoke to Ron. (Some might say too much, but not me. Startling, yes... too much, not really.)

    Snape's sudden decision to do something about the Pickle family was also good and also quite unexpected. Good on him for trying something dangerous on behalf of a family he didn't even know very well...

    Finally, you have found a rare reader in me, because I'm honestly not all that concerned with Harry at this point. I'm much more interested in what is going on with Severus and Lucius and the general nature of the spell rather than on how Severus and Harry will become closer - because the latter is more or less a given. I could write that part *for* you, and so could anyone else who's read one or two of these. What's most interesting are the new elements you've introduced and how you handle *them*.

    Again, just my two knuts, as they say. ;) You've got me v. intrigued.

    -K

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