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Reviews For Child's Play
-P.G.
I read this the other day and I thought I had reviewed it. I've been sick this week and out of sorts -- I saw this story again today and was trying to figure out HOW I knew it... it wasn't until I saw the title of the last chapter that I realized what it was and took a glance at the reviews... only to see I never left one :( Sorry about that. This was a really good chapter. You definitely write his age very well, so kudos to you! I can't wait to see another chapter and I hope you find the time to write again soon.
OMG!! What an adorable chapter!! I love that Snape just held Harry through his tantrum, and I can't wait to see how Harry wages his "Big Boy" war against Severus!! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I really do love this story - I'm in dread over the Pickle boys - and I'm hoping they get saved (and soon!)! I'm also glad that Draco has placed himself on the Light!Side, even if he didn't really realize that's what he was doing at first!! Your Tot!Harry is an absolute sweetie, and your Severus is amazingly patient, although snarky as ever!! I love that Harry calls him "the batman" in his little head, and "Nape" out loud!! This is a terrific story, and I'm eagerly looking forward to more!! Scarlett
I think the way Snape's handling Harry is perfect. You show him struggling with inexperience without making him an idiot. And you have him snap occassionally, but he's really been patient. I'm sure if Snape was parent of the month or something, there was probably a better way for him to handle the bottle situation... but really, what parent is like that anyway? I think your toddler Harry is absolutely adorable. I love his thoughts (I think I've said this in other reviews on fanfiction.net) Your little baby fic is quickly becoming one of my most favorites and I look forward to seeing your updates! |
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