Poor Harry--I love how he's jealous of the other baby and how he misses Snape.
-P.G.
Great chapter--I especially liked the rhyming fairy poems.
-P.G.
I loved Harry in this chapter and how he wanted to make Snape feel better, even though he can't understand the complexity of the situation.
-P.G.
Your tantrums seem very realistic. I remember seeing my brothers do that sort of thing. Very nice work.
-P.G.
The side story of Malfoy's conflict is what really makes this fic a 5-frog fic. Anyone could just write the baby scenes, but I like how you've extended the plot to include Draco in such a unique way.
-P.G.
Aw! I love that Snape gave him Cheep Cheep while he was sleeping. I love these cutsy baby moments so much! I noticed that this fic wasn't complete, but I really hope you choose to finish it because this is a real gem.
-P.G.
LOL! Harry is incredibly lucky to be going to the right place!
-P.G.
I love your Draco and how he is so depressed about what is about to happen, but yet he won't talk to Snape about it. He's fully ready to be in the worst trouble of his life. Horrible, really. I hope he's okay after this.
-P.G.
Aw, I love how cute Harry is and how Snape doesn't even realize that he's getting closer to the boy, lol.
-P.G.
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