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Title: Double Trouble 30 Aug 2007 4:00 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha. Poor little Harry. He's finally got some due attention and... almost-love, and now he feels threatened. Poor child. But I love it. It's so real. You can feel his little frustrations, and that he's almost at his breaking point. It's awesome.

    This should definitely be interesting - Tommy the "good" kid and Harry the "bad" one.

    Btw, I'm probably really dumb, but I never ever caught the Rugrats connection until now. Of course, I DID think of Rugrats with the last name of Pickle, but I didn't connect the Tommy part... Very nice, I must say :) One of my absolute favorite shows as a kid.
Title: Double Trouble 29 Aug 2007 9:26 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, poor Harry! this was adorable! Adorable! Hehe, I love how jealous Harry is over the new baby. And Snape thinks that Thomas is better behaved than Harry? Ah! haha! I'm worried at Harry's threatening. Hmmm... but what can a little boy do? hopefully after some trouble, Harry will realize that he's still special.

    loved the chapter!
Title: The Aftermath 29 Aug 2007 3:54 am
Reviewer: AJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ugh, I can't stand Thomas! Maybe he is younger, but he's not so young that he can't be corrected for his misbehavior. Everyone keeps telling Harry 'he's younger than you', so therefore he can act like a brat. Really, maybe Harry shouldn't have pushed him back, but Pomfrey should have at least said something to Thomas about pulling Harry's hair and pushing him.

    I really hope everyone finally recognizes Thomas's bad behavior and does something to correct it. What an annoying child.
Title: Double Trouble 29 Aug 2007 1:36 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I hope Snape can manage the two. I do feel sorry for Harry though. The poor tyke thinks everyone is liking the new addition to the group better then him.
Title: Double Trouble 29 Aug 2007 1:26 am
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) [Report This]
    You have the most fascinating story going here...I keep coming back to read it and find even MORE cute, great scenes. I cannot *wait* to read what you've got written next. ;) Harry is definitely headed for trouble. lol. Overall, a wonderful, well written story with lovable characters. ;)!
Title: Double Trouble 29 Aug 2007 1:21 am
Reviewer: JEN77 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH, I THINK SOMEONE IS VERY JEALOUS. IFEEL SORRY FOR 'NAPE.
Title: Double Trouble 28 Aug 2007 11:22 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter, happy that you updated.
Title: Double Trouble 28 Aug 2007 8:04 pm
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    aww so cute, thanks so much for the update. I think that Severus will be able to handle both of them, though I am sensing that Harry is going to get himself into a lot of trouble in the next few days. He's really jealous but needs to understand that he's going to have to share Severus at least for a while. Keep up the great work, and please update again SOON. LES
Title: The Aftermath 20 Jul 2007 3:43 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Once again. great development and great charcter interaction! I love the little children. I like how Tonks is brave but I really liked how when she blushed, her hair turned pink. :)

    Snape is very complex here. I liked the show down between him and Sirius.

    And of course, little Harry is precious! I love how he thinks he's being replaced by the new baby. Awww! Adorable! I loved it. :) Thank you for the update!
Title: The Fairy's Twin 20 Jul 2007 3:40 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! This chapter opened really dramatically. Seeing Lucius and Snape interact was very interesting and entertaining. you spin a web of intrigue. :)

    I like the fairies. Interesting turn!

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