| Title: The Rescue: Phase One
| 20 Jun 2007 8:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Clownfish (Anonymous)
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I absolutely love your Snape. He is so wonderfully in character. And what can I say about Harry and Cheep-Cheep! Here's hoping you update soon.
This story is really good and it would be great that eventually that Snape and Sirius do get on and I hope that they get the Pickle boys out. Keep it up and update soon please.
| Title: The Rescue: Phase One
| 08 Apr 2007 3:01 am
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| Reviewer: Athena_Rhea (Anonymous)
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*sigh* Well, I suppose it's good that it has ended here as I probably need my sleep. Still though, that was a terrible cliff hanger!
By the way, I like the fact that you're sticking to typical toddler behavior along with rather well-done characterisation. I always thought Sirius was a bit of a prat...
| Title: I Want Bobba! Losing the Battle
| 28 Mar 2007 2:19 am
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| Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed)
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I luv your story!!! The Harry you've created is just so cute, and so real. I like how you have him remembering stuff with his mother. That is so special. Wonderful job on the story!
wonderful chapter. Can't wait to read more. Hope Harry is okay.
| Title: The Rescue: Phase One
| 24 Mar 2007 4:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Oh, wow. Poor kids! Lucius is so evil. And what Tonks did- wow. You had such a great mix of charcters and emotions in this chapter. Great job! i loved the last part between Snape and little Harry, that was so cute! :) But who apparated into Snape's place? And do they know that Harry's there? Oh no!
| Title: The Rescue: Phase One
| 24 Mar 2007 7:38 am
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| Reviewer: miss june (Anonymous)
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I have been following this story for a long time. I am glad you updated! Keep updating!
I know that Snape will get out of this but i hope Siris appreciates it. I also hope that Snape will admitt how much he loves Harry. Also i hope that you will finish this story, iam wating to see what happens when Little Harry grows up.
have you got any other fic? I would love to read some more of you work.
| Title: Reflections
| 28 Feb 2007 4:14 pm
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| Reviewer: maha (Anonymous)
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I really can't wait please update ,pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee
i love this story so much , can you please make more of snape and harry and how snape feel about young harry loving him , maby harry could till snape he love him , ireally would like to read what snape would say to that
please we need long chupter of only harry and snape
pretty please
The only thing I fear is that you have set things up so that Snape could possibly get over his hatred of Sirius but that Sirius could never get over his hatred of Severus. There is literally no way for Snape to prove himself. With how resolute Sirius seems, he could watch Snape being tortured about Harry's location or the true nature of his 'illness' and still believe that Snape was keeping the secret for some darker, more nefarious purpose. When you distrust someone that way, their every action takes on the aspect of the sinister.
Of course, if you're not planning to 'fix' this, that's fine, but it does seem that you mean to...
-K
| Title: Baby Harry and the Meeting of the Order
| 24 Feb 2007 8:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
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Children often pretend to know how to do less than they are actually capable of. I look after my niece and nephew with their grandparents every summer (in absence of their mum and dad). My niece, aged four or so (and the younger of the two) enjoyed being the littlest so much that she would often claim ignorance concerning the simplest tasks. For instance, when putting on her shoes, she claimed she could not tie them. We solved this by telling her she could not go out unless she'd put her shoes on herself, similar to what Snape does when discussing the beef stew (you'll eat that like a grown-up or you won't eat anything). This process repeated itself constantly and in every possible venue for about a week (complete with horribly annoying 'baby voice') before disappearing almost entirely. It would still pop up once in awhile after that, but in a very different context: she would fall back on this behaviour when she *thought* she was too young to accomplish a particular task. Once reassured that she was capable, she would dubiously try it out, and respond with surprised delight if/when she succeeded. She had been the littlest for so long, that she was convinced of her incapability in some ways. She gained confidence over the course of the summer months until she was more than willing to try anything new.
Hope that helps you write little Harry. :)
As for Sirius and Severus. Hmm. I think that if you're going for a more equitable relationship, Sirius would have to witness Severus truly in the parent role and accept that. If Sirius really loves Harry, seeing Harry being cared for so well will have an impact on him. Since Severus hasn't yet fully admitted to himself how much he cares for Harry, this would be difficult to arrange in the immediate future; I think Sirius would have to be able to see that Severus *loves* Harry, yet Severus hasn't said that to Harry or thought about it, himself.
If you're looking for a less equitable relationship, the same thing is required. Severus would have to show himself to be Harry's parent, except that Sirius would be so very jealous of this that it would actually make him hate Severus more, for stealing Harry away from him.
I see either option as plausible.
BTW, Lupin's calling Harry 'trouble' and carrying him like a sack of potatoes was adorable.
-K
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