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Title: Chapter Eleven 25 Jan 2009 6:03 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...is this a dream, or is Snape just going to rub his back to prove that he won't beat him?

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter Eleven 30 Dec 2006 3:15 pm
Reviewer: Arwen17 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   what a cliffhanger!!!!! keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!! Like write an epilogue too showing that Harry was finally able to move past his abuse and live as a normal boy.
Title: Chapter Eleven 28 Dec 2006 5:30 am
Reviewer: Night_Childe25 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    You're killing me.  Why'd you have to end it there?  I love this story.  I think it's my fav. so far.  Please, please update soon.  The wait is killing me.

Title: Chapter Eleven 27 Dec 2006 8:07 pm
Reviewer: akblake (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, this is one of the most wonderful abused Harry stories I've found. I love how you keep him in the correct mindset instead of giving him a 'miraculous' recovery where he acts like a normal kid like nothing ever happened. Speaking as an abused child, you never get over it totally. My sisters and I still cringe even decades years after the fact if someone yells or moves near our heads. Thanks! And I'm dearly waiting for the next part!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!  I am glad to hear it's believeable and understandable to a fellow survivor of child abuse.  I was also abused as a child, and am basing a lot of my writing on my experiences, both while healing and while being abused.  Thanks again!

     

    Lily 

Title: Chapter Eleven 27 Dec 2006 4:10 am
Reviewer: @nnie (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I love this story! Snape is so snarky and out of his element. Harry is adorable! the Dursleyes should be dead meat! Excellent work!

Title: Chapter Eleven 24 Dec 2006 2:07 pm
Reviewer: Brittany (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Of all the places it could stop.. It's sad.. how Harry reacts and thinks..

    It's a good story though..

Title: Chapter Eleven 21 Dec 2006 8:32 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really hope you plan on having Severus use that cane on himselft!!!!  Oh, and use it on Dumbledore liberally, please!  Snape might not be rich, but Harry should not be left destitute.  Will there be house elves???  Harry could have some friends.  As interesting and well written as always.  Thanks for the update.
Title: Chapter Eleven 20 Dec 2006 5:33 am
Reviewer: Ramos (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this story, but I have to warn you to keep Harry's observations in his age bracket.  The descriptive language you used was beautiful, but I doubt that he would be able to come up with "blushing, currant-veined flames" until he was much older.  Severus might think that, and it would have been an interesting comparison to have Harry consider the sky colored like the raspberry jam he was never allowed.

    Author's Response:

    I like the idea about raspberry jam.  I know Harry's voice is way, way too mature.  I've tempered that observation in 2 ways.  One - Harry's only escape was to read, you notice that in the early chapters, so his vocabulary would be higher than normal.  Also, abused children are infinitely imaginative; I know that from experience.  And, yes, even given that the vocab is too high.  But I like it that way, and so does Harry. ;)

     

    Lily 


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