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Title: Chapter Fifteen 22 Dec 2010 9:27 pm
Reviewer: Rosa Mundi (Signed) [Report This]
    "Feeling a bit triumphant and quite languid, I flaunted my disregard for Albus’ office by just missing the fireplace with my discarded ashes before lounging in a chintz armchair. I wanted to smoke the rest of my fag before leaving. This also served to show the headmaster I knew I was in charge of this situation."

    Oh, I can just picture this. What a wonderful image!
Title: Chapter Fifteen 25 Jan 2009 6:46 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Good grief.
Title: Chapter Fifteen 12 Jun 2008 5:10 am
Reviewer: Deritine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Why the smoking? Hate hate smoking. >:( Besides that- suddenly introduced and not in canon at all. Snape's an alcoholic chain smoking bastard now? Great person to raise a child...

    Still one of the best adoption stories out there, though. The only one I can think of I liked better has Snape going insane from torture or something, going back in time, kidnapping Harry and raising him to be a Hufflepuff. I mean- how do you top that? Honestly...
Title: Chapter Fifteen 23 Jul 2007 11:31 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    It would serve them right if Harry Potter never went to Hogwarts. :-)

    Evil Dumbledore... don't you just want to kick him?
Title: Chapter Fifteen 04 Apr 2007 6:38 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! I'm glad that they found out thought, that McGonagall realized just what she did. That was awful. Poor Harry. Good chapter.
Title: Chapter Fifteen 04 Apr 2007 11:43 am
Reviewer: Snarky B. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I forgot to mention in my last review….

    The way you keep shifting perspective midway though the story is confusing. It'd be best if you'd pick one perspective and stay with it though the entire story. (or at least through each chapter) If you don't want to do that, then you should let the reader know when you change.
Title: Chapter Fifteen 22 Feb 2007 6:01 am
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh god, little harry is so cute. i am glad that in these later chapters snape has finally figured out what is going on with harry. i love how harry refers to him as his snape. so cute. i could kill minerva too.
    i can't wait for more, so far this is great!
    ~violet
Title: Chapter Fifteen 21 Feb 2007 11:51 pm
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Yaaayyy!! I am so glad the Severus is putting his foot down with Albus!! Poor Harry having to put up with seeing McGonagall all the time if they live at the school - he'll be petrified!!

    Great Chapter!! Looking forward to more!!

    Scarlett
Title: Chapter Fifteen 21 Feb 2007 7:16 am
Reviewer: pharmacy_tech (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am completely disgusted by Dumbledore's blatant favoritism and prejudice! That stupid old goat tried to take Harry from Severus, yet when Minerva is even more cruel to Harry, "she must have seen good reason for it." Grr! While I think someone should string Minerva up by her toenails for treating Harry so heinously, Dumbledore makes me even more angry because he treats both Harry and Severus wrongly.

    Okay, rant out of the way. For me, the best fics are those that make me think them through and feel strong emotions whilst reading. This one does all of that and more. You're doing an absolute fantastic job with this fic, and I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response:

    Wow!  Thanks for sharing this with me.  It makes me feel proud; an emotion I do not experience often.

    Smiles!

    Lily 

Title: Chapter Fifteen 21 Feb 2007 2:23 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    oh, man.. she just doesn't know how to handle them... *shakes head sadly*

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