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Reviews For Eight
Oh, I can just picture this. What a wonderful image!
Still one of the best adoption stories out there, though. The only one I can think of I liked better has Snape going insane from torture or something, going back in time, kidnapping Harry and raising him to be a Hufflepuff. I mean- how do you top that? Honestly...
Evil Dumbledore... don't you just want to kick him?
The way you keep shifting perspective midway though the story is confusing. It'd be best if you'd pick one perspective and stay with it though the entire story. (or at least through each chapter) If you don't want to do that, then you should let the reader know when you change.
i can't wait for more, so far this is great! ~violet
Great Chapter!! Looking forward to more!! Scarlett
Okay, rant out of the way. For me, the best fics are those that make me think them through and feel strong emotions whilst reading. This one does all of that and more. You're doing an absolute fantastic job with this fic, and I can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for sharing this with me. It makes me feel proud; an emotion I do not experience often. Smiles! Lily
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