I really like this - it was recommended on one of my yahoo groups. I was almost in tears at the beginning, until Sev caught on. I'm not to surprised with your portrayal of the "tabby" I never really saw her a decent head of house. She doesn't stricke me as someone you want to talk to about anything important. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Title: Chapter Nineteen
| 10 Jun 2008 1:33 am
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Reviewer: kimjo2 (Anonymous)
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lovely and so painful. i always thought harry and severus had a lot in common with their upbringing. i love how you've shown severus' struggle to overcome his natural inclinations! thank you so much and i look forward to more.
This story just gets better and better with each chapter. Poor Harry.
Wonderful job.
I love this story! I love how you switch the perspective back and forth between Harry and Snape. And the way you capture their thoughts is just beautiful. Thank you!!
Title: Chapter Nineteen
| 21 May 2008 12:34 am
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Reviewer: NaiveGhost (Anonymous)
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I have to reread the whole story. Ah, poor me. ;-)
You write Severus very well, and the switching viewpoints isn't confusing.
Keep writing, and posting!!
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This is a great story - carry it on pretty please? mind it would be nicer if harry was to call him uncle sev or something rather than godfather maybe? still a really good story thanks
I'm so ecstatic you updated! It was quite a pleasant surprise.
I think it's great Harry got to redecorate his room, every kid should get to do that and it's another step to making Harry feel like a normal kid.
It was very sweet of Sev to allow Harry a birthday party, and Harry's reaction was so adorable! I look forward to reading about that party, should be a great experience for little Harry.
I would absolutely love it if you'd continue this story. I adore little Harry and love to read his and his new godfather's developing relationship. This is a very sweet story, I look forward to any new chapters you post!
P.S. Will Ron show up in your story sometime? I love the Weasleys!
Title: Chapter Nineteen
| 19 May 2008 6:12 pm
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Reviewer: SurrealJaenelle (Anonymous)
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Keep writing; what's going to happen next ? Will they meet the weasleys? How did Chloe know Snape was a wizard? Will they meet again?
Title: Chapter Nineteen
| 19 May 2008 5:35 pm
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Anonymous)
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took you long enough- lol. thanks for the update, and please, please! update soon. I love this story!
*Grins* arh this story so soppy but good soppy, would definitely like to read more! Your really good with people's pschye's, you capture the mind of an eight year old very well, i particular liked the part where Harry sent Dumble's flying on his arse, twas very funny to read.
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