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Reviews For Emrys Snape
Title: Chapter 1 03 Jul 2020 3:08 pm
Reviewer: Lemon Curd (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape ... in a SUV.

    I will use this as an example to explain why some people might feel that your portrayal of Snape is out of character.

    Severus Snape may, in fact, be of the social class that would drive an SUV in Europe nowadays (though I admittely rather doubt SUVs even were fashionable in the UK back then) but, and that is the problem with this, he is highly intelligent and, at other times, gives the impression of not wanting people to notice his working class muggle origins.

    It seems highly unlikely that he would even own something as muggle as a car at all, yet even more unlikely that he would purchase one that announces to all and sundry that he comes from working class origins, feels inferior because of that and has purchased an unnecessarily large car to bolster his self-esteem.

    I acknowledge that you might have written this story back when little was known about Snape's origins and general character ... yet I would still advise any aspiring author to go for the more neutral "car" unless they wish to make a deliberate statement with the type of car.
Title: Chapter 1 20 Sep 2006 5:46 am
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting beginning. I hope that you continue with this story. The beginnings are always the hardest part I think. :)
Title: Chapter 1 11 Sep 2006 12:35 am
Reviewer: adrian (Anonymous) [Report This]

    okay, the idea of the fic is good and would be very interesting

    BUT why on earth is sev acting so COMPLETELY unlike himself???? that is what makes this a story that wont hold a true fans attention for long. this is not a snape and harry story but a story about harry and a stranger you choose to call snape, its not the real snape. not the one from the books

Title: Chapter 1 09 Sep 2006 11:59 pm
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    This looks good. Can't wait for more.
Title: Chapter 1 09 Sep 2006 11:50 pm
Reviewer: weasly_girl (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh do go on! Very good story so far can wait for the nest chapter. :)

Title: Chapter 1 02 Sep 2006 10:46 am
Reviewer: Sakya (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good start. How will Snape adopt Emrys without Dumbledore knowing?
Title: Chapter 1 01 Sep 2006 3:47 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not a bad start.  Interesting and different.  Your writing is good, but it desperately needs someone to beta it.  There's so many punctuation errors that it's distracting.
Title: Chapter 1 31 Aug 2006 8:27 pm
Reviewer: Visitor (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw, what a cute story!  I really like it!  Hope you will continue it!  I love Baby Harry Fics with Snape as caretaker!
Title: Chapter 1 31 Aug 2006 8:45 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, Snape in a SUV. Did not see that coming. I like where this is going. Keep writing!

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing . I'm almost done with Chap. 2 so it will be sometime soon if i dont get distracted from it .

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