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Title: At Peace With One's Self 14 Sep 2012 5:08 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! The story may be short, but it gives one a lot to think about! I read it through twice, & I really got even more out if it the second time. Really interesting that Snape, not Dumbledore, ended up with the decision, even though Harry wanted to call the shots. Very thought provoking-- well done!
Title: At Peace With One's Self 04 Dec 2011 6:33 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Wish I knew what he chose lol
Title: At Peace With One's Self 28 Mar 2011 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting, and chilling too. Canon Snape could have used an eye opener like this.
Title: At Peace With One's Self 04 Mar 2008 5:49 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh! Dark Harry! I thought it was pretty good!
Title: At Peace With One's Self 19 Sep 2007 11:25 am
Reviewer: Terrwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked this story, even if it was short. You captured a great astomsphere, and I could actually see this happening.

    But I am interested to know more about the situations surrounding Harry, eg. Why would Snape and Dumbledore both be worried that Harry would kill himself? The line 'which means I can run afterwards and be left alone,' implies that Harry has tried to run away before the events in this fic take place. Why would he do that?

    And the decision that you have made Snape face is an interesting one, just the kind of choice that has characterized Snape since he became a spy.

    Would you be interested in continuing this into a longer story? I would really love to read more... you are a talented writer, and could no doubt easily pull it off.

    Whatever your choice, I liked it, and would loved read more of your work. Please e-mail me at terrwyn@hotmail.com if you wish to talk to me, I would greatly appreciate hearing from you.

    Terrwyn.
Title: At Peace With One's Self 01 Sep 2006 10:46 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely. Good job! :) Nice little play in Snape's thoughts. There were a couple of typos: "Certianly not the" Certainly, "proove yourself different" prove. And it was a little odd to hear Harry say "shall": "Either I live or I shall die". It's a little OOC. You also have an extra space here: "and the halls , ghosts and pictures"

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I might get to correcting those mistakes, but probably not. This is amature compare to some of my other works, but the pounding in my head wouldn't go away untill I got It out. I may expand the story, add detail and such. Thanx again for the review.

    Des


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