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Reviews For At Peace With One's Self
But I am interested to know more about the situations surrounding Harry, eg. Why would Snape and Dumbledore both be worried that Harry would kill himself? The line 'which means I can run afterwards and be left alone,' implies that Harry has tried to run away before the events in this fic take place. Why would he do that? And the decision that you have made Snape face is an interesting one, just the kind of choice that has characterized Snape since he became a spy. Would you be interested in continuing this into a longer story? I would really love to read more... you are a talented writer, and could no doubt easily pull it off. Whatever your choice, I liked it, and would loved read more of your work. Please e-mail me at terrwyn@hotmail.com if you wish to talk to me, I would greatly appreciate hearing from you. Terrwyn.
Author's Response: Thank you. I might get to correcting those mistakes, but probably not. This is amature compare to some of my other works, but the pounding in my head wouldn't go away untill I got It out. I may expand the story, add detail and such. Thanx again for the review. Des |
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