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Reviews For Rules of the Game
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 26 Nov 2022 2:50 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Its certainly...interesting. To be completely honest with you, it reads a bit awkward. Snape just kidnaps this kid because he has a scar... and then Harry just... okays it? Just because the guy claims he knew Harrys parents. I just would think a Harry who has been through all he has AND been roughing it on the streets for months now... i just think he would be at least a little more wary
Title: Chapter 28: Boggarts and Dementors 29 May 2020 8:46 pm
Reviewer: NoK (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh god! Poor Snape
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 21 May 2017 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Unusual good start to the story thank you
Title: Chapter 35: Rats 13 Nov 2016 10:59 am
Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This really good. I'm look foward to see where Harry ends up
Title: Chapter 35: Rats 08 Feb 2015 10:31 am
Reviewer: Aimer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No! That's no fair! I want more!!
    Give me more!
Title: Chapter 9: Classes 03 Apr 2012 12:25 pm
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    “Was it bad? Did he—did he make you scrub cauldrons?” Neville asked, a bit of fear in his voice, as if scrubbing cauldrons was really code for him throwing cauldrons at you

    Te he!
Title: Chapter 7: One Question, One Answer 03 Apr 2012 12:11 pm
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I love seeing Harry trust Snape over Dumbledore. And Snape coming to Harry's rescue the way we all wish he would have in cannon. I also love the Snape-Dumbledore tension. It's great to see those two go at it!

    Also, this line is heart-stopping, coming from a scrawny 11-year old kid:

    Harry shrugged and said, quietly, “I think he already has a claim on me, Headmaster.”

Title: Chapter 6: Snape's Deal 03 Apr 2012 12:03 pm
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love that two giggling first-year boys can easily guess Dumbledore's password :) Great scene with Harry and Neville. It's really fun to see them together. I like seeing a mean Seamus too. That's not something I'd ever considered before. Great characterization!
Title: Chapter 5: Perceptions 03 Apr 2012 11:59 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This makes me smile. I've never liked Percy until now :)
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 03 Apr 2012 11:30 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this. Especially how Harry almost kicks Sev in the balls :) Made me smile. I'm interested to see where this goes...

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