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Reviews For Rules of the Game
Title: Chapter 12: Hospital Wings and Holidays 27 Dec 2006 8:35 am
Reviewer: violet (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i lied, i may have to comment all the time, because the pictures you paint with some of your scenes are just too wonderful!! harry crying in the infirmary and snape comforting him, and then what snape sees in the mirror...so cute! loved it!
Title: Chapter 12: Hospital Wings and Holidays 08 Oct 2006 1:07 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    I love, love, love your little Harry. He's so sweet, but easily hurt and hopeful too. I love the way you portray him and you express his emotions not only in his head, but by his actions too, like going pink and playing with his blankets. It was so heartbreaking how Harry thought at first he would head home because he was expelled but then it was only for summer break, yay! So sad the way he had to say goodbye to "everything he loved". Lovely part.

    I LOVED the end part when Snape went back and looked in the Mirror Erised. :*) Great! Thanks for sharing! 

Title: Chapter 12: Hospital Wings and Holidays 29 Sep 2006 1:05 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Anonymous) [Report This]

    What a fabulous line, there... "if this was his heart's desire, he had a lot of work to do."  Never seen the Mirror used as a tool to plan one's life, but it really ought to be.  Nice!

    -K

Title: Chapter 12: Hospital Wings and Holidays 24 Sep 2006 10:00 pm
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh, don't let this be the end! This story is brilliant! (and I don't often think stories are brilliant so consider yourself doubly praised :)

Title: Chapter 12: Hospital Wings and Holidays 24 Sep 2006 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderfully done, hope that you continue with this

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