| Title: Chapter 15: Potions and Ponderings
| 07 Jul 2007 6:34 am
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| Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous)
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"Hermione’s perfect potion had been achieved by simply giving Pansy Parkinson a bottle of nail polish."
Awesome line. LOL.
| Title: Chapter 15: Potions and Ponderings
| 07 Oct 2006 11:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Haha I love how Hermione just gave Pansy a bottle of nail polish to get a perfect potion. XD I love how you have the children, children, espeically the 12 year old boys. Great job. :) I shudder a little that they melted chocolate frogs into hot chocolate though. XD But it's cute, even if the hot chooclate has to be waaay too thinck and it used to be frogs! LOL. I like the way Hermione's noticing things. I love your description of Neville, how he's happier. That's great.
| Title: Chapter 15: Potions and Ponderings
| 28 Sep 2006 2:51 am
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| Reviewer: Syret (Signed)
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I simply love your story. Keep up the GREAT work.
| Title: Chapter 15: Potions and Ponderings
| 27 Sep 2006 4:16 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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I can't tell you enough how much I enjoy your writing!!! As an AU, you have skillfully crafted a blend of JK's storyline with your original take on things. I hope you don't mind, but when you finish I want a hard copy of this to share with my mom! She may be in her seventh decade (isn't that where McGonagal is?), but she likes great stories too. I'm wondering how long Snape will let Harry be pummeled before he takes some steps to remedy the situation. It's so nice that Herm's dad also wants a 'piece of the action.' Why doesn't Dumbledore do something in this AU? Has he left the playing field in order to leave it open for Snape? No loss in this story; I like the way it revolves around your chosen characters. Remember: These are not flames, just thoughts that run through my head as I think about what I've read. I wish I could copy this and use it with my students just to show them what I think about when I read something I like. Hmmmm. Maybe I'll infect some nonreaders with my own love of the Potterverse! The principal will probably be sporting a pointed hat in no time! The chorus teacher would really go for the teaching robes---I think he suffers from Snape envy in that regard. But he really could give Lockheart a run for his money. See: Your universe is so realistic to me it's seeping into my reality. Bet you didn't expect THAT to happen. Can't wait until the next time we catch up!
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