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Title: Chapter 17: Halloween Voices 03 Oct 2006 7:25 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Aw, porr Harry's cast won't let him fly. : Poor kid. Won't play Quidditch this year, that's awful but I guess he's got a lot more going on this year anyway.

    I loved how Neville stepped up and flashed the camera in Colin's face and berrated him. It's a very strong move and I liked this hint of his strength inside and that he might be able to take charge.

    Lockhart having his students just read from his books is hilarious! Did they do that in JKR's COS? I can't remember... Poor Harry falling down and hitting his head. Poor guy. I love how Seamus pulled a prank and they paid a Hufflepuff to call out present! LOL!

    I loved this line: “But–I don’t want to be famous. I just want to stop being the stupid hag.” LOL.

    Hermione had agreed that Lavender had gone a little bit over the line. “But Harry, he really is a very accomplished wizard. He’s only acting out his adventures because he thinks we can learn from them.” Ha! Yeah right Hermione!

    I liked how in this version the trio were walking back with Percy when they came upon the ghastly Chamber of Secrets scene. Your Percy is really interesting, I like how... responsible he is and it's different than the pompous,  joking manner he is in the books. I liked how Ginny was there and crying, I wonder if that was what she would be like  for real if she hadn't been possesed. I think it's Ron in this story that's possessed, poor Ron.

Title: Chapter 17: Halloween Voices 02 Oct 2006 2:08 pm
Reviewer: Carpe Savium (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Utterly fabulous! Snape is trying to help Harry just like Snape would, and Harry's muddled, and its all so utterly cute!
Title: Chapter 17: Halloween Voices 02 Oct 2006 1:52 pm
Reviewer: erin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A great story - I just started reading and got hooked.  Nice job. :)

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