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Reviews For Rules of the Game
Title: Chapter 21: Confrontations 07 Oct 2006 11:33 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    lovely! loved the end, especially about them owning a cat! LOL. you had a couple of typos you may want to fix. Sorry, I didn't keep a tally of them so I can't point them out.

    I'm glad that the story has finally come out,I'm really glad that Harry wasn't really, really injured the way some stories make him, I found that this was much more believable. Poor guy. I love how Harry kept asking for reaffirmation at the end as he was led out. He has good friends. I wonder what they will do next about this situation. Great story! Thanks so much for posting it! 


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