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Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 08 Jan 2007 7:59 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I want more please... :)
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 05 Jan 2007 3:34 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Congratulations on the new featured status!

    It was very much deserved!
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 27 Dec 2006 10:15 am
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh i am totally hooked!!! i can't wait for more. Severus is not going to take things with Sirius well at all...well, and vice versus. i can't wait for an update! are you going to take this story all the way to 7th year? i hope so! its fabulous, i love it, and you!
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 23 Dec 2006 5:43 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting chapter. I really like how this showcased just how confused and wrong everyone was about Peter and Black. I really like your characterization of Remus. I still think your Hermione is great. Good job!
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 02 Dec 2006 7:56 am
Reviewer: WolfDragonDemon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it I hope you continue!
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 30 Nov 2006 1:55 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have one word for you: UPDATE!!!!
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 28 Nov 2006 8:34 am
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    That was a brilliant chapter! Can't wait for more!

    One thing I wanted to mention was the Snape nearly tripped up and called Harry 'my something...'.

    I was thinking, if you're going to have him start progressing into a father-son relationship, you should show some of Snape's thoughts as he starts to think of Harry as a son. It would be awkward if he just starts declaring to everyone and Harry that he's his surrogate son.

    I love your story and I can't believe how long you've been able to keep everyone in character.

    Good luck with the next chapter!

Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 27 Nov 2006 4:32 am
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this.  Please update soon.  I spent my whole evening reading this instead of working.-but it was well worth it.  Thanks
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 27 Nov 2006 1:55 am
Reviewer: Jade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter, but hard to read.
Title: Chapter 32: Maps, Malfoy, and Little Petey Pettigrew 26 Nov 2006 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Banner (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorry about the formatting problem.
    Great updates. I love watching Harry and Snape grow together, and Hermione and Neville are developing as more than the "also-ran" and the "brain."
    This is fun. Thank you.

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