Title: Chapter 35: Rats
| 13 Nov 2016 10:59 am
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Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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This really good. I'm look foward to see where Harry ends up
Title: Chapter 35: Rats
| 08 Feb 2015 10:31 am
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Reviewer: Aimer (Anonymous)
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No! That's no fair! I want more!! Give me more!
I'm depressed the story just ended right here.....Well it was good while it lasted
VERY GOOD~! Please update soon!
Eagerly anticipating the next chapter. And I just know that Harry would want to stay with Snape and not Sirius. Especially after hearing Sirius call Snape names and the 'tunnel' incident.
Hmmm will Harry come up with a nickname for Sirius. (Something like a version of Snivellous for Sirius?)
NOOOO!!! Please update soon! I absolutely adore this story and what you've chosen to do with the characters. Please, please update soon!
What a place to stop writing!
I would love more of this story, but it looks like you have not written in it for over 2 years... are there any plans to write more?
It is really quite good, and worth continuing. Severus' insecurity shows in so many little ways, but I cheered when he did what was right for Harry. Does he really think Harry will abandon him? Of course he does.
It would be quite interesting seeing Snape and Sirius try to win Harry, and also try not to harm Harry by their rivalry. Even though you seem to be following canon fairly closely, I would be fascinated to see Sirius free and in this Harry's life: a harry that prefers Snape.
Wherever you take it will be fascinating, so long as you (please please please) take it somewhere. Just one more chapter.... and another....
(Your story is good enough I am even finding myself forgiving the grammar and spelling errors, but... maybe by now you have a spellchecker?)
Thank you for writing.
Will you be updating or is this story abandoned? I'd really like to read more.
OH MY GOSH WOW! This story is insanely amazing! I love it! Awww and of all places to leave off haha! Great Work! I can't wait for Harry to prove Snape wrong when he still wants to be with him. Excellent work!
this fic is great, really enjoying it, can't wait for the next update
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