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Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 10 Oct 2006 5:39 pm
Reviewer: lilyseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    UPDATE!!! I can't wait for the next chapter...
Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 09 Oct 2006 1:04 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]

    Good chapter. I like where this is going. Draco helping babysit - could Snape be any meaner? I also like how Snape does things as he talks, but Harry is so preoccupied with what he is saying that he does not notice what Snape is doing. That doubling seems very Slytherin to me, but it's a great way to get things done without people noticing until it's too late.

     I did notice a few typos and mistakes that broke up the rhythm of the story. I ould be happy to beta read for you if you like and give some indepth feedback. Email me at mybeautifulmane@yahoo.com.

    Keep up the good work, and post soon!

Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 08 Oct 2006 9:08 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Is this a Snape helps Harry or a Snape torments Harry, just in a different way than the Dursley's?
Title: That greasy git! 05 Oct 2006 1:25 pm
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Anlther lovely chapter.  Harry and Snape seem very much in character.
Title: That greasy git! 04 Oct 2006 9:07 pm
Reviewer: celenesnape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please keep writing this fic, Harry and Snape characters are good constructed and in character. I liked it very much, look forward to seeing how this develops.
Title: That greasy git! 04 Oct 2006 9:23 am
Reviewer: Lynx_lw (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This`s turning to be very interesting...

    I always imegined Snape like the person that knows 101 ways to make a potion and 101 ways to make you swallow it. So it was very funny to read those parts ;)

Title: That greasy git! 04 Oct 2006 5:00 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]

    Like this chapter. I think Snape needs to step in and take control before Harry distroys himself.

     I would like to see longer chapters though. You get us into the story, and then it's over. (pouts). Give us more, give us more! 



    Author's Response: Thank you and dont worry the next chapter is going to be much longer as there is a lot i need to fit in with it.
Title: That greasy git! 03 Oct 2006 9:28 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I enjoyed it immensely!  Update soon!  I really like the antagonism you've got going here!
Title: That greasy git! 03 Oct 2006 7:40 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hm.  I think you need to go over this chapter again for major punctuation editing.  Otherwise, it's a very good chapter.  But the punctuation errors are so frequent it makes reading it difficult.  The reader looses the flow, trying to sort out the sentences.
Title: An Abnormally Large Nose 03 Oct 2006 7:25 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey, I like this story.  Good start!  Harry and Snape both IC so far. 

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