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Reviews For Solstice
Fantastic chapter! I really enjoyed the antagonisim between Draco and Harry and his friends. I am enjoying your characterization of Draco a lot. I noticed he seemed jealous of Harry's friends before the Quidditch match. Harry just had to take the Dreamless sleep, didn't he? And now he's in trouble. Good job with the interegation when Snape was asking Harry about Lupin, and when he was asking Draco about the Dreamless sleep.
I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter of this! I must needs go add this bad boy to my favorites list! I really enjoyed the complexity you have developed in the different relationships the characters have with each other. The characters are all flawed beings, which makes them very real and they are all written in such a way that no matter how they feel about each other, I feel a certain level of sympathy for them. Good stuff! Tracy
wow... good :) I have read many stories about harry potter but I like this one very much... english is not my birth language since I was born in slovakia and I am still living here but for what I can say it has good vocabulary too.. continue writing please :) I would like to see some additions
I figured Harry would get caught. So much drama in these young lives. A lovely chapter. |
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