Reviews For Rubbing Alcohol
You did a great job of telling us about what led up to this story without boring us with tons of exposition. I liked how you kept Snape "Snape-like" and yet let hints of compassion creep in.
I'll check out your profile for other stories now. A good handling of the challenge.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments! I'm afraid there won't be a sequel, but you can imagine what it was like if you want, and believe that it was what happened. :)
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A few small criticisms:
Naturally, a few small typos, such as "Owlery".
Some of it feels overstated. A subtle mention of certain horrors or difficulties they are facing can be more terrible than laying on the paint with a trowel. Never underestimate the power of suggestion, especially where horror is concerned.
Also, a bit of misused punctuation. E.g. "Did you know that" does not require a comma.
Hope it helps,
Author's Response: Thanks, I will go back and make changes next time I edit. :)
This was really good. I love the setting of a weakening Hogwarts under seige, as it was. VEry interesting, really. It almost made me want to continue, if I were any good at this kind of writing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
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