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Reviews For Rubbing Alcohol
Title: Rubbing Alcohol 06 Dec 2021 9:10 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautifully, if painfully, done.
Title: Rubbing Alcohol 23 Nov 2020 3:10 am
Reviewer: Ze Awesome Me (Signed) [Report This]
    Dude this is awesome!!
Title: Rubbing Alcohol 15 Aug 2011 8:21 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    I know it has been several years since you wrote this fic, but dare I hope that you wrote a sequel about Charlie's arrival?

    You did a great job of telling us about what led up to this story without boring us with tons of exposition. I liked how you kept Snape "Snape-like" and yet let hints of compassion creep in.

    I'll check out your profile for other stories now. A good handling of the challenge.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments! I'm afraid there won't be a sequel, but you can imagine what it was like if you want, and believe that it was what happened. :)
Title: Rubbing Alcohol 06 Jun 2011 9:49 pm
Reviewer: 1sunfun (Signed) [Report This]

    Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Title: Rubbing Alcohol 14 Aug 2009 8:05 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, what a... depressingly nice story.

    Author's Response: Okay, thanks! :)
Title: Rubbing Alcohol 29 Jul 2009 9:30 pm
Reviewer: Nota Bene (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting situation. Hogwarts under siege, no supplies. I like the interaction between Severus and Harry, you can't tell if they get along or not, like if they're friends. I really liked this. I'd love to see more...hinthint...


    Author's Response: Thank youfor your review! I really appreciate it. :)
Title: Rubbing Alcohol 30 Jun 2009 6:22 am
Reviewer: Aethyr (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this very much. You manage to tell a very deep story in only one chapter; it feels as though there's an entire world, an entire backstory behind it with just the scenario. Well done.

    A few small criticisms:
    Naturally, a few small typos, such as "Owlery".
    Some of it feels overstated. A subtle mention of certain horrors or difficulties they are facing can be more terrible than laying on the paint with a trowel. Never underestimate the power of suggestion, especially where horror is concerned.
    Also, a bit of misused punctuation. E.g. "Did you know that" does not require a comma.

    Hope it helps,

    Author's Response: Thanks, I will go back and make changes next time I edit. :)
Title: Rubbing Alcohol 26 Sep 2008 6:20 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This was really good. I love the setting of a weakening Hogwarts under seige, as it was. VEry interesting, really. It almost made me want to continue, if I were any good at this kind of writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Title: Rubbing Alcohol 11 May 2008 7:04 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this one a lot better than the other story of this title.

    Author's Response: Aw, thank you. It's an answer to a challenge by the same name though. Anyone can respond to it, including you *nudge nudge*. ;)
Title: Rubbing Alcohol 04 May 2008 3:11 am
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Such a scary view of Hogwarts! I like the way their relationship was handled though. Good work!

    Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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