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Reviews For Sparkling Revenge
Title: Sparkling Revenge 01 Mar 2023 11:37 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha,
    Brilliant.
Title: Sparkling Revenge 11 Jun 2011 10:08 pm
Reviewer: 1sunfun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice.
    CCAP
Title: Sparkling Revenge 17 Aug 2009 4:13 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, very cute!
Title: Sparkling Revenge 27 Jan 2009 9:36 pm
Reviewer: xxslytheringirlxx (Signed) [Report This]
    haha thats really funnyy
    great story


    SG
Title: Sparkling Revenge 29 Jun 2007 7:43 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    This was cute. Do you plan on writing another? I love the glitter idea.
Title: Sparkling Revenge 12 Feb 2007 1:27 pm
Reviewer: SlytherinWeatherWorker (Signed) [Report This]
    ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! Oh and Sev?? if you pulled that with me.... let's just say you'd be learning how to string a beading loom.
Title: Sparkling Revenge 12 Feb 2007 1:26 pm
Reviewer: SlytherinWeatherWorker (Signed) [Report This]
    ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! Oh and Sev?? if you pulled that with me.... let's just say you'd be learning how to string a beading loom.
Title: Sparkling Revenge 09 Jan 2007 1:11 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Haha, that was cute. :) I liked the conversation between Harry and Ginny, how Harry kissed her like a brother. When he got serious and asked her if she was wearing glitter, you did a very good job expressing that moment, movement, and mood. Very good job.

    I don't understand how the glitter got out though. This part: Harry raised a hand and placed a mask of shock as he up capped the glitter and muttered a spell tapping the vial with his wand. A moment later Snape yelped as glitter appeared on his face.

    I don't understand how that works. It seems like Snape is looking at Harry, Harry raises a hand.. no clue why,which is holding two vials of glitter. Hand still raised high, he puts a cap on it and then touches it with his wand. Glitter appears on Snape's face. Yet he doesn't know who did it?

    It's a very cute story, but a little confusing. :)


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