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Title: Chapter 6: A Day Out 22 Oct 2007 10:23 pm
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the story but there is one problem. That there no more chapters to read.
Title: Chapter 6: A Day Out 17 Oct 2007 7:46 am
Reviewer: Huntress (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Its nice to see Severus trying to do the right thing but any person with even a smidgen of common sense knows you don't leave a two year old unattended EVER... put them in a playpen for a moment yes... just leave them playing on the floor in a house that has never ever been child proofed... NO WAY.
    He has the proof in his hands and seen with his own eyes that the boy he thinks is spoiled(although how a two year old who just lost both his parents is suppose to be spoiled is beyond me) is anything but... Let Severus grow up please...
Title: Chapter 6: A Day Out 18 Apr 2007 1:18 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was an awesome story. Hope you can update soon. Looking forward to it!
Title: The Intro. The narrow escape… 08 Apr 2007 7:11 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Actually he wouldn't have needed someone to 'accidently' leave the door unlocked. I've heard of two year olds getting out of the house. I worked with a woman who was freaked out one morning when her barely walking child, got outside, and was found crying because she couldn't get back in. I'm not sure what's going through their heads, but if your going to write about a smart child than they might as well be smart enough to find a way out of a house. ;)
Title: Chapter 6: A Day Out 27 Mar 2007 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Update!!! Please. XD
Title: Chapter 6: A Day Out 03 Mar 2007 6:06 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is really good so far! I hope you can find time to write more soon! :)
Title: Chapter 6: A Day Out 28 Feb 2007 9:16 pm
Reviewer: loves curse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oooh i really LOVE ANF LIKE this story.
    please update soon. :)
Title: Chapter 6: A Day Out 25 Feb 2007 12:06 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    For a 2 year old Harry is being great! So many people have no experience with the energy and thoughtless of that age. Thoughtless as in brain not developed enough for much planning or reflection--he's still mostly reacting. Why do so many people forget that babies/children/teenagers don't think the way adults do because they can't??? Nature didn't make them little adults no matter how they look like them!!! Fortunately, Harry hasn't been abused so long that he has stopped being a rather normal baby. Snape has no clue about babies let along abused ones.
Title: Chapter 6: A Day Out 20 Feb 2007 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    Keep up the good work! XD
Title: Chapter 6: A Day Out 20 Feb 2007 6:53 pm
Reviewer: MAHA (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH POOR HARRY
    well ilike your snape , soanking harry sounds like what the real snape would do ,, no ice cream i feel sorry for harry , ilike your story please update as soon as you can ihate waiting to read more of this great story :)

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