Dumbledore’s subtle manipulations were nicely done, even as they were transparent to Snape. Dumbledore’s reasoning was sound as well.
| Title: Chapter One
| 16 Mar 2022 9:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very manipulative thank you
I love this line:
Ingenuous eyes widened. "I'm sorry. Did you have plans?"
Very interesting, very good story.
I love that last line - so Dumbledore!
Interesting twist on him being Harry's father.
Aww, I liked this chapter. Though I am a bit confused a to whether or not Snape is supposed to be teaching at the school or not. But I guess that'll be cleared up later.
As sad as the line is, I really liked it when Snape said "I don't care about Harry,". Something about how he used the boy's first name, rather than his last name to emphasize his lack of concern. Almost as if he is trying to convince himself of that.
I love how Dumbledore can still make Severus feel like a student. I suppose because it shows that he is not totally shut off. Someone, even if it's Dumbledore, can still reach him.
| Title: Chapter One
| 15 Oct 2008 1:34 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Oh, twinkletoes! "His seed?" It's so very Biblical of you! And Severus is such a grouch- I love it! But don't get too inflated. I'm sure I'll find something to criticize soon.
This story is great so far, i really like your style, the dialogue between Snape and Dumbles is masterfully crafted, not too strained or implausible but pitched just right to be realistic. Well done.
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Lol, Merry Christmas. That is so like DD. Good job so far :)
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