Caring for a sick child is so terribly heartachingly difficult. I hate when mine would suffer. Difficult to watch and not be able to do much.
-his
They're just so darned perfect together.
| Title: Chapter Six
| 31 Mar 2012 7:58 am
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| Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous)
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Awww...Snape got flustered! It's good to see him letting his walls down a little, even if it was an accident. I've never seen our dear potions master become flustered enough to flee from a room; it was kind of a refreshing sight. I love that one little boy can be his undoing. In every father-son fic I've read, Harry truly is his salvation.
I love the characters you're working with here. Lupin and Neville are brilliant additions. I like that your Lupin isn't a complete push-over. He's shrewd like Severus, and can communicate on his level. He also stands up for his old friends, while still being loyal to what Harry needs.
Also, I'm glad to see the Snape-Dumbledore mentorship you're building. I love seeing a positive relationship between those two men. Severus needs it so badly, even though he would never admit it.
Anyhow, those are just my reactions so far. Hope that it's helpful!
really u must start posting diabetic warnings for each chapter cuz they just get sweeter and sweeter!
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