I’m so glad that Harry and Hermione are wondering why Lupin accompanied Harry to the hospital during the full moon. I was wondering the same thing! There must be a hidden plan in there somewhere. I really enjoyed the interplay during Potions class.
A great chapter thank you
I love this story. I love this series. I am sorry the domain "skyehawke" disappeared (or should I say "Disapparated") on you. You could do worse than to place A FAMILY LIKE NONE OTHER here at Potions and Snitches...and it would be appreciated, too. Not to mention re-build an audience for you, since new chapters would bring the AYLNO series to a whole new set of readers. Something to think about! And in the meantime, here's another "10".
Nice. I am happy with Snape's actions, they are so... well almost un-Snapish but till in a Snapeish way... get it? :D :D :D
Title: Tests
| 19 Apr 2008 3:11 am
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Reviewer: Narinu (Anonymous)
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Awesome story! I like it very much
I was positively grinning like crazy in this chapter! Especially at Hermione's strangled scream, and more so at Snape's quirk of the lips. *grin*
This chapter was really funny. It's also very creative, it had never even crossed my mind that a reason for Harry to spend time with Snape would be because aunt Petunia was very ill. Very origanal, from other fan-fictions I've read.
First off, I've just noticed how similar the tests are, with Snape standing by, assuring Harry that he's not alone, to events later on. I think this forshadowing is an element that really makes your story so good. It makes your story solid with a well thought out plot. It seems as though you really knew where you were going with your story before you wrote it, instead of randomly going along.
Also, the second test is really funny, perfectly Snape like. And I like the little note that Snape sent Harry.
btw... although I've read this story before and I know it's posted elsewhere... I get really excited when you update. It's nice to read it again at a slower, more steady pace. (last time, I read it at every possible moment between work and school...I started the when you were nearly finished with it.)
Great chapters! If Malfoy is eavesdropping then why don't they just put up a silencing charm?
I love this story, I really do.
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