I like your Snape a lot. He’s showing more humanity with each chapter in a very smooth and believable way.
Title: Expecto Patronum
| 01 Jul 2014 6:16 am
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Reviewer: tsuj (Signed)
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"To visualize the flash of fire from his wand, to feel the sizzle deep inside him rising to the surface of his skin and then beyond, to make the spell come out. " Limiting comments to your sublime writing skills. That description of Harry's experience of magic males me *believe*!
"she cares for you too" - Too. Too! **sob!**
"Well, she cares for you TOO" gives the game away, Severus! Love this story!
*laughs* I love Harry's outburst at Snape's joke -- I love that he made a joke! haha! :P
Remus has always been funny. Too nice... like harry will break if he does magic in front of him.
It's cute how Harry stays up to wait for Snape. And I love Snape's joke about Dumbledore. It's even funnier because Harry thought Snape was serious.
THis story is great and I love how you keep updating frequently! :)
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