Your writing is brilliant
"he could feel magic all around him, holding him up, supporting muscles that on their own, were little better than puddles of tired silk. "
Such brilliant imagery!
Ooh, I wonder what's in the package Draco gave Harry. Dumbledore didn't throw it away, did he?
It's amazing, how detailed about the scene you are even though Harry couldn't see. And his mantra "what must be" is so sad. I can't imagine... poor Harry having to go through all of this T_T.
I'm glad that you keep his character strong though. He's not all injured and weak, but demanding answers from Dumbledore. Your fic really is amazing.
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