Your chapters are so well paced, yet packed with life - weaving together multiple strands of plot at once. It’s a true pleasure to read, thank you.
Title: Reciprocal Magic
| 11 Jul 2011 8:47 am
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Reviewer: Nenefee (Anonymous)
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If I were Harry I'd have exploded already^^ But really, I'd think he'd be more verbal about people discussing him behind his back and making decisions for him. Like some chapters back, in the hospital wing, when Snape was blathering about Draco's choices, but conviently doesn't give Harry a choice about who to spend his time with...situations like that always make me feel for the Harry Potter character as so often portrayed in fanficion; it always leaves me sitting at the metaphorical edge of the chair waiting with rapt attention for the sh.. to hit the fan...
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