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Title: Out Of Sight 16 Feb 2022 5:23 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is spinning himself into a dark vortex that I hope he spins out of!
Title: Out Of Sight 12 Jul 2011 2:26 am
Reviewer: Nenefee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    48633Isn't Snape just an awful father... oh, I know the situation gets resolved - I read this fic once already, but I cannot help thinking that it really is Snape who makes all the mistakes: he bullies Harry into doing things he doesn't want to do, he lies (even if it's by omission mostly, it's still lying), he's betraying secret from one 'son' to the other, he's breaking promises and conspires with Harry's friends against him, he uses if authority as a teacher in family matters...
    and as always Harry's the one feeling guilty. While I can imagine canon Snape like that I find it hard to believe Harry would take those things lying down lake that. But then again, this is AU. And Harry's kind of in prolonged under-the-weather state.

    I actually can't really find any compassion in me for your Draco character. Even though he is likable in this fic, kind of. But turning your back on your life when things shock and disgust you (i.e. the meeting on Samhain) and then suddenly trying to sneakily make nice with your former enemy, isn't exactly a redeeming trait, in my opinion; I think I've yet to see an altruistic action from Draco.
    In fact, this Snape-Draco combination seems almost as bad as Dumbledore..

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