This story contains an astounding convergence of action, intrigue, drama, and deep personal and interpersonal dynamics. I really appreciate how you’ve integrated self harm into your story in a way that feels authentic.
You are very good at writing conversation. You make it sound so natural yet not boring even during monologues
| Title: A Portrait of Evil
| 11 Mar 2011 1:10 am
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| Reviewer: Shh (Anonymous)
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Oh no, poor Harry! Um - was Remus trying to tell Draco that he's gay? Sounded like it - but maybe I was projecting my own ideas into the dialogue... Roses smell nice, but Remus still doesn't like them?
Just a few more chapters to go!!! WOW!
I think Draco needed something like that to get him up out of the doldrums."
hahaha somebodys watched the phamtom toll booth! lol i love that movie
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