That chapter was a doozy. I liked your changes to canon history. It was an interesting twist unlike any I've ever seen before.
This fic has had me enraptured since I first found it last night. I keep meaning to review, but every time I get to the end of the chapter, I'm too excited about the next one to stop! Now, however, I just have to tell you how good this story is. You can really feel the developments and changes in Harry's relationship with Snape. The connection between the two of them, the way that they understand one another better than anyone else in the world... it's fantastic.
Killing off Mrs. Weasley is something that I've rarely seen done before. The funeral and fight were really well written. You've really captured the essences of the characters and their actions and motives are both realistic and accurate. Thank you!
I love this story. It’s compelling and intriguing. I enjoyed Ryan’s backstory. Looking forward to the sequel!
This was a touching and cathartic chapter.
| Title: Chapter 17: The Potions Master
| 08 Apr 2023 1:38 am
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Terrific chapter, and I loved the context for the story title.
| Title: Chapter 16: Truth and Lies
| 07 Apr 2023 5:07 pm
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I love that assertion about truth. It would have made a difference, I suspect, for Snape’s generation.
Great chapter! I only wish that our favorite feline had nabbed him. Hopefully next time…
| Title: Chapter 14: The Hospital Wing
| 06 Apr 2023 1:38 am
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I was hoping that Harry would tell Dumbledore about a certain rat, so they could snap him in a trap!
Wow, this story has me hooked like a fish and won’t let me go. Amazing!
| Title: Chapter 12: Ottery St. Catchpole
| 06 Apr 2023 1:06 am
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Another riveting chapter in this brilliant story.
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