| Title: Blind Spots
| 15 Aug 2015 8:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I'm with Severus on this point brilliant Dialogue thank you
Interesting. I haven't read a truly nasty Snape before that actually dislikes Lily or impure blood.
| Title: Blind Spots
| 29 May 2011 8:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous)
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Snapes being a looooooser! XD
I totally agree with Dumbledoredore bliviatin' him.
I sincerely doubt Severus will be able to control his "I hate Potters." tendencies too soon. He needs to grow up. And, it's sad that he cares more about the headmaster obliviating him, than he does about the fact that he has a son.
Oh well, i'm sure things will get better. This is only chapter 2 of 45.
Also, I think you should probably put better warnings up for your story. Like the bit between Sev and Lily, it's sexual and I know it's not as graphic as smut would be, but someone who may have a past of sexual abuse or something would deserve to have a bit of a warning before reading that. It is common courtesy.
I love your portrayal of Severus, he's completely in character, both in emotions and thought-processes, something one rarely sees in fanfic. His interaction with Dumbledore is masterfully depicted. Great job!
Dumbledore bashing! I heard that phrase somewhere, so I thought that this was the right time to use it... I think, haha. Good job on the story. I think I may add it to my favorites. :)
| Title: Blind Spots
| 29 Jan 2005 7:11 am
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| Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous)
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Interesting. The confrontation. A little slower in this chapter but unavoidable
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