| Title: An Unfortunate Genetic Relationship
| 16 Aug 2015 2:48 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love how you handle the angst all out thank you
| Title: An Unfortunate Genetic Relationship
| 18 Aug 2010 7:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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I really loved how you've written this chapter; seeing the situation from first Harry's perspective, then Severus gives a really interesting insight into the characters thoughts and emotions. I also like the dynamic you've created between the Gryffs- their conversation felt very natural and realistic
| Title: An Unfortunate Genetic Relationship
| 07 Apr 2006 11:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Origanum (Anonymous)
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you kwow, you've done this great. The relationship between Snape and Dumbledore is great, especcially that he doesn't trust the man anymore. But when he goes his own way, it tuns against him! Very believable, graet story.
| Title: An Unfortunate Genetic Relationship
| 04 Feb 2005 3:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous)
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I like where this is going! It would be incredibly out of character for Harry to cry "daddy" and run into Snape's arms, as so many of these fics seem to do. I'll be happy with the mutual hatred as long as you care to perpetuate it--it makes the eventual understanding all the sweeter. I hope you update soon. :)
| Title: An Unfortunate Genetic Relationship
| 29 Jan 2005 7:19 am
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| Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous)
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Again, a very good chapter. I'm interested to see how you continue this. I hope you update frequently. Good luck
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