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Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 25 Dec 2020 6:57 pm
Reviewer: thegorgonexperiment (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, excellent chapter and what a lovely Christmas present too! Thank you for sharing!

    Author's Response: Thank you!! I hope you had a Happy New Year!
Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 24 Dec 2020 9:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response: You're welcome and thank you for the review! :)
Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 24 Dec 2020 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great Christmas present! Although I hope we get the next part soon, this is a great chapter. It is just another snake, has Harry tried talking to it? I know, it been used, just a thought. I love to see how their relationship is developing.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I love that idea, but no, in OME, I theorize that the snakes are more representative of dark magic than any kind of literal snake that Harry can communicate with. That would definitely be cool though!
Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 24 Dec 2020 2:37 pm
Reviewer: Xedra (Signed) [Report This]
    So much wonderfulness in this chapter! I love Harry's conversation with Hunter and Snape being brave with the snake.
    I worry about Harry's resolve to legilimize Voldemort, but I understand his reasoning - Severus is someone he loves and he's going to do whatever he can to help him.

    Author's Response: Aw thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Yes, it's a risk, for sure, but he definitely thinks it's worth it!
Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 23 Dec 2020 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for the Christmas present. I am looking forward to see what happens next! I hope you have a Merry Christmas!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you had a Happy New Year!!
Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 21 Dec 2020 12:26 pm
Reviewer: natalie (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s me again (the person who will never stop gushing over this fic)! After a rather grueling finals week, this chapter has been the greatest early Christmas gift I could ask for!

    Specific notes about this chapter: Despite the obvious oh-God-Snape-is-in-pain-and-might-die, I found this chapter so sweet. Some of my absolute favorite scenes are those where Harry and Snape just good-naturedly chat/banter, and I loved the interaction between grumpy Snape, Harry, & Hunter! Like Harry, I’m also overly invested in learning more about Snape’s social life… or lack thereof. For all of our sakes, I wish Snape would just agree to play 20 questions or something of the sort & satisfy our curiosity :) It’s also always so fun to see Harry and Snape’s relationship through the eyes of Hunter and Kneader — who knew a snake could be so perceptive? I’m already so ready for the next chapter & Harry Legilimizing Voldemort (and Snape’s reaction of course :))!

    Regarding my review from last chapter: I am so so happy that you decided to pick OME back up again, your writing ability & creativity really has paid off! I’m also absolutely thrilled to hear about your plans for a Merlin fic! Other than Harry & Snape, Arthur & Merlin’s dynamic is probably one of my favorites of all time. Merlin’s finale absolutely *crushed* me and I almost religiously read fix-it fics and s5 AUs to fill the hole it left in my heart :) My biggest frustration is that we never get to see Arthur and Merlin truly working together as friends with Merlin’s magic revealed! There’s also way too many moments in the series that weren’t given enough closure & way too many opportunities for Merlin & Arthur to have some fun with this whole magic thing! I honestly could rant forever about Merlin and what could’ve been season 5… but let’s just say that I’m so happy that you might be working on a Merlin fic sometime! And again, if you ever are in need of a beta/editor, I’m always happy to help ;)

    For Merlin fics, I’ll have to look at my old fic rec lists, but I remember some of my favorite (non-slash) Merlin & Arthur fics were on AO3! When I find my complete list of favorite Merlin fics I’ll be sure to send them your way, but for now, one fic that randomly comes to mind is To Be Known by crookedassembly! It’s a pretty short angsty magic reveal one-shot.

    I noticed that you mentioned you were going to upload OME/other fics to AO3 — that’s the fanfic site that I probably have the most experience in, so feel free to let me know if you have any questions about it! Also, I would love to follow any writing blog that you might put out there! In my experience, I find Google Sites and Wix both super easy to navigate when building a blog/website. Google Sites in particular has lots of different tools to help you link different websites/documents, format a webpage, & more! I’d also be more than happy to help with that!

    I hope you have a restful & enjoyable holiday season!! Keep being amazing :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review!! I love writing Harry & Snape chat/banter scenes, so it's nice to hear that you like to read them. :) And thank you for the Merlin rec - I read it and enjoyed it! Feel free to share any more that come to you! :) :)

    The Merlin story I have in mind to write would begin in the final moments of the last episode, wherein Merlin makes a deal to go back in time (as his own past self, not as a time traveler) to correct his mistakes that led up to Arthur's death. The catch is that only he will remember...but yay for us, Arthur remembers too! So they traverse the final season again, working together, figuring out their new dynamic, trying to fix things, only events diverge greatly and their "fixes" result in some new challenges. (Because who actually wants to read a straight-up retelling of that season anyway? Not me.) So yeah. I want to write my Avengers story first, and I eventually want to pen an OME sequel, so we'll see if the Merlin one gets written. It would be fun to write. :)

    I'm thinking about getting started uploading chapters to AO3 over the next week or two. It looks like I can upload all chapters one at a time first as a draft, and then post it all at once? I experimented with ways to import and upload, and it looks like there isn't a totally easy, one-upload way to do it? Every way I tried involved correcting the formatting. And I might have to rely on people to let me know if I miss any tags. :)

    Thank you again for the long review! I really appreciate the kind words and the help!!! I hope you are having a fabulous new year. :) 

Title: Chapter 57 - That Stubborn Thing You Do 21 Dec 2020 11:01 am
Reviewer: Saadia (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks! It's the best gift for me to read your fanfic!

    Author's Response: Yay I'm so glad! Thank you for reading! :)
Title: Chapter 56 - A Talent for Meddling 06 Dec 2020 11:10 pm
Reviewer: HP Fan (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, I'm sorry about your friend. I'm glad you're feeling better though! I've been waiting for an update for so long! Can't wait for the next chapter!
    P.S Please make a sequel Also, I want to know if Harry's gonna defeat Voldemort in this story

    Author's Response: Thank you! So kind of you! I sure hope to write that sequel! No, Harry won't defeat Voldemort in this story, but he just might gain a victory. ;)
Title: Chapter 56 - A Talent for Meddling 03 Dec 2020 4:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m so sorry for your loss and the fact that you have been so poorly.. I hope you will feel better and more peaceful soon.
    I love how you are developing their relationship with each other and how they are helping each other. I particularly like the flashes of humour that Harry gets from the Ron/Hermione relationship. Harry’s answer to her question was pure laugh aloud schoolboy humour, thank you so much.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying the humor! :)
Title: Chapter 56 - A Talent for Meddling 01 Dec 2020 2:07 pm
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter filled my heart with happiness! I loved it (as always).

    Thank you so much for the heads up that it's ending soon. I'm very excited about your marvel fanfiction. And the potential for a sequel here. Will you post a link to where your marvel fic will be? Also I'm kind of hoping it's going to be a peter and Tony mentorship thing? But I mean I love your writing so I'm sure I'll enjoy it regardless.

    Glad your feeling better and I'm so sorry to hear you lost a friend. These times certainly aren't easy 😞

    Author's Response: Aw thank you! I am going to take a break first, but then I plan to post my Marvel story on both FF net and AO3. I've never posted on AO3 before, so we'll see how that goes...but I would like to post OME on there first to get the hang of it. I'm a sucker for mentor and father/son relationships, so while it will include other characters, it's definitely going to revolve around Peter and Tony. I can't help myself. ;) Thank you again!

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