Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 09 Nov 2009 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Mila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I really like it so far!!! Are you going to continue? (Please!!!) Very interesting subject. It looks like you're the only one who responded to this challenge...
Title: Chapter 1 05 Feb 2009 2:44 am
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this story - well written and with no mistakes I can see, it's really drawn me into a world where Harry is just as impressive a bastard as his predecessor was! I do hope that you get round to updating this again - I'd love to know what happens next!
Title: Chapter 1 25 Jun 2008 11:03 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Are you going to carry on with this story? I think it is an intersting idea and I want to know what it is that Harry is researching and what has turned him into someone even snarkier than Snape. You have a good writing technique and it was a pleasure to read something free of spelling and grammar errors that flowed well.
Title: Chapter 1 13 Apr 2008 12:30 am
Reviewer: Seth Cienesty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this start. It's a better start then most stories. I would really like to read more. Your story promises to be most interesting. ^.^
Title: Chapter 1 25 Mar 2008 3:51 am
Reviewer: Seth Cienesty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yo,
    This is really good...
    The only problem it that it is no... how do I say this...
    NOT FINISHED!!!!!!!!!
    ^.^ Thank you for your time.
Title: Chapter 1 29 Feb 2008 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Tim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very promising, a pity you don't seem to continue the story. I hope, you are writing something somewhere, because I think your writing-skills are excellent.
Title: Chapter 1 24 Jan 2008 5:07 am
Reviewer: Seth Cienesty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this story. Please be nice and write more. Please.
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jan 2008 7:33 am
Reviewer: Seth Cienesty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is surprisingly good. I would really, really, REALLY like to read more please.
Title: Chapter 1 21 Aug 2007 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, poor kid. Harry is MEAN! But that is to be expected. :) It's like a complete changing of roles, only Harry doesn't have a reason to hate Snape, except for catching him looking for/using the Dark Arts book. i think that he needs more thoughts throughout the chapter about how he feels about the kid, such as how he's dark, and dark things were used for torturing/killing, ect. Harry seems a little blank without the background thoughts of WHY he thinks things of the boy.

    I wonder if the boy DOES need the Dark Arts book for a good reason though. like, perhaps a paternity potion? Or something to heal his ailing caretaker?

    This was a great start. Are you going to update it? I hope so. I'm very interested in reading more, and seeing where this will travel. :)
Title: Chapter 1 12 Aug 2007 12:22 pm
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope you continue this I really like what youve go so far!

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