Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 10 May 2007 3:01 am
Reviewer: Still me (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting. I love Snape's solution to his 'problem'. I'm not sure why you're going through the bother of his 'trying out' three boys though. And despite the movies I don't believe any orphanage would 'lend out' children no matter how rich someone was. (Maybe for photo ops but even that would be strictly supervised and wouldn't take days.) Snape should have just walked into a muggle orphanage picked the mangiest looking brat (Maybe a quiet one hiding in the corner because he'd be easier to manage.) and performed some sort of magic to have appear as if the child was adopted into a good home and walked out with him. But this a slightly different approach and I like that. I'll be reading to see how it goes.
Title: Chapter 1 07 May 2007 9:31 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked how you opened this chapter, and the whole story. This is just a powerful statement:
    "Severus Snape swept through the corridors of Hogwarts, School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The students unlucky enough to find themselves in his way were ruthlessly pushed aside with biting comments and a severe loss of points." Full of action and description! I love it.
Title: Chapter 1 04 May 2007 3:11 am
Reviewer: Vintage (Signed) [Report This]
    sounds interesting so far. I'll keep reading!

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