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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Mysterious Metamorphosis
ok, rant over. you are a very good writer to elicit such an emotional response to your story. Well done!!! :-) Author's Response: I fully agree! It's just one of those things when you are following a Challenge and filling all the requirements, and then also following were your Muse takes you at the same time.
Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: I am more than happy to clear up any confusion that I can. If you have questions you would like answered, feel free to ask. Thank you for the review!
Aery
Author's Response: Thank you! I had several people look through each chapter before I posted, as well as using spellchecker, and I still find mistakes even now. *shrugs* Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the review. Aery
I loved the Animagus parts and when Harry became a kitten that was cute. Wouldn't have minded a little more kitten time but it served its purpose. Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the story. I am sorry there were still unclear things for you. If you have questions, feel free to ask me. I am happy to clear up what I can.
Thirdly Harry could have tried healing Bill or Charlie, the one that was injured. Were was Severus? Fourthly why would Harry wait for Percy to talk nonsense when he should have roped the bastard and order him to tell them were Ginny was, or he could have forced his mind into Percy learning this information strait from the source instead of listening and then attacking. Author's Response: Please continue on reading, most things become clear in the next few chapters. Not all is as it seems in this chapter. If you still have questions let me know. I will have to reread myself, as it has been so long since I have read anything from this, and I have had many things happen in RL, that I can't remember much from the story. But, I would be glad to do so, if you still have questions. *hugs* Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: I am so sorry for such a late responce. Thank you for the review! *hugs* I am very glad to hear you liked the story!
Author's Response: I am sorry I am so late in responding. I wasn't getting notifications for some reason. (Not sure if it was site related or Real Life related.)
I am glad you enjoyed the story, thank you very much for the review! *hugs*
Just finished reading the entire story, had me up til 10am reading (as in, no sleep til then) and now finally finished it all. I must say, it was really brilliant! I thoroughly enjoyed the plot and direction that you took the characters, although the two points I disliked the most was that you killed Draco and that I believe Tonks wasn't in character for the most part. But there were little grammer issues, not that I ever really pay much attention to that. And it was really properly written; you didn't rush things but also kept them at a good pace. The story was engaging and I could imagine basically everything that was going on, even the stuff about Harry exploring his inner magic (for lack of a better phrase). I also like your explanation on various topics that I haven't heard before,, I would give some examples but as I have just read 34 chapters I cannot recall something specific that stands out. Anyway, great job and I really loved this story, I do hope you write more fics! -Mel Author's Response: I am sorry I am just now responding. For some reason I wasn't getting notifications on reviews for a long while. I am not sure if it was a site thing, or a real life being in the way thing. Either way, I am very grateful for your review. I myself have spent many nights with no sleep and a really good story. It makes me feel wonderful that mine has inspired the same sleeplessness. :D I'm sorry about Draco, but you can blame my beta. She begged me not to kill off someone else, and I told her I had to kill someone in their generation. So, it's her fault. lol I don't remember much about Tonks in the story, it's been a long while since I have read it. But I am sorry that she felt out of character for you. As for the grammar issues...well, there were many, MANY more before my betas got a hold of the story. So, we all thank them very much. :D I am trying to write more, I wish my muse would cooperate with me. Again, thank you for the review! *hugs* |
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