| Title: Raven
| 12 May 2007 2:28 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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I liked it. What, you want War and Peace every time??? You may be unhappy because this story has so much of the plot written as a summary. That is what you needed to cover so many years since the focus wasn't on the development of Harry and Severus' relationship, but on the outcome of their non-relationship. I was expecting Harry to name his Potter son Severus. You surprised me with the eyes. To have Severus reincarnated was terriffic!!! I'm only surprised that you didn't have Harry look over his family history and see that the black haired, black eyed man had a history of helping the Potters.
| Title: Raven
| 11 May 2007 5:12 pm
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| Reviewer: akblake (Anonymous)
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Even with Snape dying, this was absolutely wonderful! I especially love how he was taking care of young Harry when no one else bothered to :)
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