Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 23 04 Aug 2013 12:58 am
Reviewer: Lemondrop07 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am in love with this story so far! I am so glad that you are not one of those writers who turns snape into this motherly person and gets away from his character. It's important to keep the characters personalities the same as Jk Rowling did. You are doing such a great Job of that. I can't wait to read the rest of the story!!
Title: Chapter 23 28 Jul 2013 11:05 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! Everyone is so awful to him and he really has no one that understands him. Not even his own father wants him.

    I really hope that , while no one expects Snape to be the mushy type, that he eventually at least can be some sort of father to Harry.

    I also hope that they find out eventually that Snape 'did' invent some sort of potion. Hey wait, what about the Polyjuice potion that Harry is using?

    Anyway, I have to reread the past few chapters. I think that I missed an update. I am wondering if Hadrian was sorted yet. I do hope that if he's sorted into Slytherin, that Snape will be a little easier on him. I do hope that Harry gets sorted into Slytherin, and then Snape finds out that Harry should have been there the first time.

    Great job. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response:

    You may have missed chapter 21, because I posted 21 and 22 at the same time and it's possible you only got a notification for one of them. That would be my best guess.

    Yeah, Harry is feeling very alone and cut-off. But, still not quite ready to accept Snape as someone to rely on and confide in.

    The potion Harry is taking is a variant of an existing potion, so it isn't an invention. Besides, Snape didn't tell him the whole truth about what that potion (or, rather, the three different potions) does. Snape's potions are a subplot, so Harry and his friends will have to figure this one out for themselves. Maybe getting his hands on more of Snape's old books will help, if you know what I mean. :-)

    I have another chapter coming soon, my beta has it right now. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 23 26 Jul 2013 7:40 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! Really enjoyed it! Still loving the story! Felt sad for Harry this chapter.....he's feeling quite lonely at the moment, isn't he?
Title: Chapter 23 26 Jul 2013 6:42 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Signed) [Report This]
    As always, an enjoyable read. I particularly enjoyed Harry's jealousy when Snape put his arm around Draco. Thank you for another chapter!

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