Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 25 17 Sep 2013 4:50 am
Reviewer: bianca_slate (Signed) [Report This]
    Heh! "Try to get into the Chamber of Secrets," indeed! I wonder if that is Voldemort's thought instead of Harry's.

    Author's Response: Harry's not a horcrux anymore, so it's just his own thought, but he is under the influence of several things that make his thoughts not exactly like his normal thoughts.
Title: Chapter 25 25 Aug 2013 6:20 am
Reviewer: PersephonesChyld (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoy your story--please keep going!!! Anxiously awaiting your next chapter....
Title: Chapter 25 23 Aug 2013 1:23 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    This is truly an excellent story. I didn't give it much attention when it first came out because I really prefer stories in which Harry remains Harry and has the same friends and house. This time I gave it more attention because it's very well written. That continues to be the reason I'm sticking with it. It's an excellent story and Harry and his thoughts are excellently developed. I kept hoping that some things would be resolved before I got to the end of what's written, but alas, not so. So now I'm dying for another chapter or 12 or 20. I really appreciate your story.
Title: Chapter 25 13 Aug 2013 2:01 pm
Reviewer: Dclady (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am very much looking forward to more of this story!
Title: Chapter 25 12 Aug 2013 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter and well handled emotion thank you
Title: Chapter 25 08 Aug 2013 8:00 am
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    I had meant to review during my read but just had to get to the next chapter each time! Enjoying it very much, but cant help a little gripe about Snape's relentless and judgemental jabs at Harry EVERY time! It seems Harry definitely needs to open up a bit more re his history but surely Snape must see some difference to his preconceived impression of Harry. Had hoped the 'sick' scene :>) would have helped but Snape still didn't see his chance... looking forward to your next update.. and maybe just a little warm and fuzzy for harry?, it must be so wearing for him.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you're enjoying it!

    I think Harry and Snape are really having some sort of misunderstanding when it comes to Harry's childhood. Snape might be more sympathetic if Harry would focus on something that doesn't sound like, "Oh, poor me, I didn't get what I WANTED." That said, he is clearly aware that Harry had a rotten time with the Dursleys. He just hasn't moved on from being aware of it to caring.

    Harry won't be getting many warm fuzzies in the very near future, but Hadrian might. I agree that Harry is very lonely and worn down right now. He's under a lot of stress from multiple sources, and we all know how tiring it is to be under constant stress day after day. That's why he's started having panic attacks. He just can't deal with everything without being allowed a way to vent.

Title: Chapter 25 07 Aug 2013 9:46 pm
Reviewer: Flummox (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was so excited when you started updating this again, and the chapters and getting better and better! There are still so many mysteries that need to be cleared up (magic and potions are making me really curious), and I have no idea how things will end up working out! I also really like that while we understand why Harry is making the decisions he is, he still comes across as quite bratty/sulky, for lack of a better word, which is much more realistic. I hope Snape soon discovers more about Harry's home life, though!

    Author's Response:

    Fortunately for Harry, it's finally his birthday, so he won't have to shuffle around like a pathetic Squib anymore. That will be one load off his shoulders. :-)

Title: Chapter 25 07 Aug 2013 2:16 am
Reviewer: Avery Riddle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow this is good, I only wonder if anyone snape or harry will realize they actually are related? Keep writing this is great.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Snape already knows (he found out at some point between Dumbledore's death and the time he took Harry from the Dursleys). Harry will find out eventually, but not very soon.

Title: Chapter 25 07 Aug 2013 2:08 am
Reviewer: 2inchfish (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, you update quickly. It's lovely (although I suspect you'd get more reviews if you updated less than once a week.)

    Now to figure out what'll happen when Harry goes to the chamber of secrets, and when the horx will be revealed.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    I LOVE reviews, especially when readers tell me what they like, what works for them, or what doesn't work for them, since I can then try to fix any problems (plot holes or a lack of clarity). But, I really don't care how many of them I get, or how many per chapter. I don't know if waiting longer between chapters would increase the number of reviews (I'm not convinced it would), but it would be silly to keep a completed chapter un-uploaded. :-)

Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2013 7:40 am
Reviewer: Grace (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story! Though I feel sorry for Harry and his talent for always doing the wrong thing haha

    Can't wait for the next chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! Yes, I think that is the biggest and best-developed talent Harry has. LOL

    Next chapter will be out soon. My beta got it back to me this afternoon, so I just need to edit it and discuss a few things with her (we usually argue/discuss at least a few things).


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