Interesting first chapter. Harry must really be feeling bad. His friends were hurt and Sirius and Dumbledore both dead.
This started off really tense and I'm hooked!
Title: Chapter 1
| 06 Jan 2010 9:49 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love your Harry he's very IC stoic and self-reliant thank you
I love this story. It is so very sad. Your Harry is spot on. Everyone is.
Title: Chapter 1
| 06 Jun 2008 8:54 am
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Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous)
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This is a very intriguing premise--removing all those whom Harry depends upon at this point and making sure that Voldemort isn't part of the equation anymore (I think). Canon Weasleys would not have abandoned Harry, but I'll suspend my disbelief while I see what you do with your premise.
Wow this seems to be a really dark fic. Basically Snape is still an evil bastard and Lupin is his...hmmm.
Great start! I really love the way you have painted this world that is so familair, yet so different and unique. I am a little shocked, and dismayed that Harry has no one though! it's so sad. Sadly, it could probably happen, and it makes for a great opening for Snape! I wonder if the Weasleys will come around? Maybe they'll get over the danger and reach out to Harry again later. I really like that you use Remus here.
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