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Title: Chapter 4 29 Sep 2013 4:44 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I was surprised that Remus didn't just say it was a boggart on the third floor. Harry wouldn't have gone near that with his current memories. Snape as Harry's guardian was a surprise. It certainly isn't going well.
Title: Chapter 4 21 Jun 2008 6:22 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi there,
    I have read all of the chapters up to now in spite of myself. You write very well. I started out of an idle sense of curiosity and I liked that you said Snape wouldn't get a mother of the year award. I hate it when Snape and Harry fall in love too quickly.

    There doesn't seem to be any danger of them falling in love at all here. And I am intrigued as to what is wrong with Remus of course. And how could Snape just suddenly be Harry's guardian?

    I nearly stopped reading when Arhtur and Molly have turned against HArry. I hate that.

    The whole thing is a big mystery and I will have to keep on reading to satisfy my curiosity.

    I feel so sorry for Harry.

    ~Lesley~
Title: Chapter 4 20 Jul 2007 3:38 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.
Title: Chapter 4 19 Jul 2007 3:32 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh. Things are heating up. You have done a good job of logically continuing Harry's behaviour from OotP without him having the information he gets from Dumbledore at the end of the book.

    Author's Response: Trying to figure out how to reintroduce info that Harry would have learned at the end of the 5th book, and what would have changed as a consequence of my changes to Rowling's version, has been one of the challenges while writing this story.
Title: Chapter 4 27 Jun 2007 7:43 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. My. God. My jaw dropped and stayed dropped for the whole end of this chapter! I'm literally still recovering.

    You've built up the mystery so thick here that I felt close to tears of frustration on Harry's behalf several times over the course of this chapter. There is *so* much going on that he just isn't aware of - it's maddening, not just for him but for the reader.

    While I appreciate the suspense, I'm almost ready to say it's too much. The main character has spent so much of his time in abject despair; and the worst part of it is Lupin himself, who, as Harry points out at the end of this chapter, was in his support until very recently. Now, whatever his reasoning, Lupin is ignoring Harry completely when he isn't being rude to him. Holding back Harry's letters adds to the impression of your main characters as isolated and reviled. The mystery has been fascinating, but it's hard to enjoy this level of tension for very long; it's literally painful to read.

    -Kirinin
Title: Chapter 4 13 Jun 2007 7:26 am
Reviewer: Asprin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello? Are you there? HELLO? I want my update now. I also want it with a side of slash. Make it snappy too. Hop to it. NOW! What are you still doing here, reading this? You should be WRITING.

    Author's Response:

    I don't think the slash is going to be too overt in this story until practically the end, but thanks for reminding me that I still haven't hinted at any.

    And for some odd reason this also reminded me that I completely forgot about Kreacher. :-)

Title: Chapter 4 12 Jun 2007 11:08 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting chapter. I'm feeling a bit depressed for Harry though becuase he has been so isolated. Update again soon!
Title: Chapter 4 12 Jun 2007 5:09 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my, that was a great chapter. Can't wait for more
Title: Chapter 4 12 Jun 2007 12:24 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow. Oh wow oh wow oh wow. "Because, Potter," Snape said, his low, deadly voice raising the hairs on the back of Harry's neck, "I am your legal guardian. Everything you own -- this house, any letters you may receive -- belongs to me." Just delicious. What a blow- and remus, what's the matter with him? He just telled at Harry. Why is he so upset? It looks like Harry is in a terrible position, the worst possible. I want to read more! Please tell me that you will update soon!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Jan. I think Remus is having a hard time acceping that his feelings toward Harry have changed, but there clearly is something wrong with him on top of that. And Harry really has terrible timing. Night of the full moon and Remus had just argued with Snape? Harry was just asking for it.

Title: Chapter 4 12 Jun 2007 8:18 am
Reviewer: x (Anonymous) [Report This]
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