| Title: Chapter 5
| 08 Jul 2015 10:15 pm
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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This is absolutely fascinating. I am also quite enjoying your style, brisk and mysterious.
I would be as nice as Harry, i think i would shut both Lupin and Snape, not talking to them at all.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 07 Jan 2010 1:02 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the interaction between the three I must say I agree with them all and I love the fact that itis not gooey
| Title: Chapter 5
| 08 Nov 2009 7:35 am
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| Reviewer: Aconite_Black (Anonymous)
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arg I hate Lupin! He and Snape are acting like children. Blaming Harry for everything its horrible.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 02 Jul 2008 9:01 am
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| Reviewer: CJ Masters (Anonymous)
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Just wanted to drop a line saying while I think that you have done a good job keeping Snape and Harry in character, Lupin doesn't seem to be, especially in his response to Harry's actions and obvious confusion.
My heart bleeds for this poor kid. 'Everything is always about you Potter'. I would say that nothing is about Harry. Snape loathes him and some fool made him Harry's guardian. Why should Harry just accept having everything in his life decided for him?
This is really frustrating me, I have to say. i don't know how Harry hasn't really exploded at Lupin as well.
An one question. Just because Snape is harry's guardian, how does that make him the owner of everything that is Harry's. Is that the way it works in the wizarding world in your story.
I loathe Snape in this story, and for the first time ever, you've managed to make me dislike Lupin.
And I presume the slash relationship is Sev/Lupin? What a drag having Harry in the house. Why didn't they just leave him in danger in Privet Drive seem as no-one cares for Harry anyway.
~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 5
| 05 Jun 2008 7:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous)
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I feel really bad for Harry, honestly being stuck in that house and lupins making him feel completely responsible for Sirius and Dumbledors deaths, that's horrible. I really don't understand what Harry did wrong and why he had to appoligize to snape, I mean Snape took HIS letter. poor kid.
I really feel bad that no one really cares what happens to him any more either!
Goodness!
anyways i like ur writting style its so very JK Rowling, I can honestly say Harry is in perfect character
I wonder what snape meant making a whole scene with the soup and why lupin stopped smiling when harry said not to listen to snape....?
| Title: Chapter 5
| 24 Feb 2008 9:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous)
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I'm actually reading this for the second time. This is very good. I can totally feel for Harry, suspecting that Lupin is with Snape and being miserable about it.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 23 Feb 2008 7:09 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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It beats me why Lupin and Snape think Harry's behaviour is unacceptable when they treat him like a dog. Snape didn't thank him for his work, yet bitches about Harry's rudeness? Way to model proper behaviour, Snivellus. Frankly, they are lucky he is not suicidal.
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