why do I get the feeling that this is not a polyjuice potion but rather some sort of potion to remove a glamour or something and this is harrys real face
Whew...i don't know what i think of this story. the first handful of chapters was painful to read with all the lies, misdirection, hatefulness, bullying and dismissal of harry by snape and remus in particular. Harry is basically kidnapped by snape and when he asks why, is told is had nothing to do with him. Newsflash, it has everything to do with him. The lies seem to be continuing with the potion he just drank. I'm so disappointed with remus as a character. if he can't stop hurting harry, he should just be honest and back away. plus, wasn't remus aware to a certain extent of harry's home life? i don't know if i can take another 15 chapters of everyone hating harry, in particular when they don't know him and have never taken the time to do so. Ach, poor harry. I think if i was in his position, i would probably mentally dismiss both of them from my life forever, knowing that in a year, i'd have control over my money again and can decide if i'll ever step foot in hogwarts for 7th year, or just hire tutors, take the tests, and escape the hostility. i just can't see a reason for harry to keep reaching out with his heart only to be smacked back. At some point, enough is enough.
Bad manipulator Lupin; no grace lost on him
| Title: Chapter 7
| 16 Mar 2008 8:08 am
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| Reviewer: Misty (Anonymous)
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Thanks for updating it's been ages! I think i have figures out whats going on here I can't wait till Harry...err Hadrian does too. And i can't wait till you explain what Snape and Lupin are doing spending so much time together. Thanks agian!
| Title: Chapter 7
| 23 Feb 2008 8:14 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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At times, Lupin and Harry appear to know absolutely nothing about each other--perhaps accurately. Snape, however, knows what Harry's childhood was like, given the Occulmency lessons. So his insistence on Harry's ego, and Lupin's acceptance of it seem odd.
Poor Lupin! Again he does *get* Harry, and expects things that don't come.
| Title: Chapter 7
| 23 Jan 2008 4:56 am
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| Reviewer: ouch! (Anonymous)
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Crap. I can't believe you ended it right there. I want to read more! I was cringing everytime Lupin lost his temper with Harry. I kept expecting him to blow up. I didn't think he would take it so well.
And i'm really interested as to what's Snape's reaction is going to be when Harry is sorted. And if the prophecy is still the same. Please update.
| Title: Chapter 7
| 30 Dec 2007 11:33 pm
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| Reviewer: jellylegs (Anonymous)
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Where'd ya go?? It's been awhile since you updated...please continue! It's good.
| Title: Chapter 7
| 23 Nov 2007 8:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Caro (Anonymous)
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Loving this, hope you add some more soon!!
wowowowwww!!
Just finiehsd it and well, I'm torn between liking and hating it ;)
I mean I can understand Harry being furious about not being told anything in advance but also understand the adults for not telling him ...
It is a a damn well written story so far and I'm looking forward to see how the relationship(s) will develop. So, I hope for an update sometime soon :)
I know I ought to have reviewed each chapter but I just had to keep clicking "next". An excellent read and I definitely love your take on the Severitus Challenge. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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