Title: Chapter 14
| 25 Apr 2010 11:01 pm
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Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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I can't believe I missed two chapters of this story...!
I enjoy POV stories, and Rowling herself is an expert at misdirection. I don't know if you are trying for that or not, and I suppose you'd rather not say.
I must admit, that your story is not typical. But, I don't know... When I read it, I feel overwhelmed. Your Snape is OK, but your Harry is not Harry and Lupin sucks (sorry for expression but I can't stand him). Your story is too depress. When I read story, I always empathize with the main character, so when I read your story I feel too much solitude, emptiness injustice, unfairness. Harry shouldn't apologize Snape at Grimmuld Place, and he should be angry at Lupin. If I were him, I would told him "Fuck off" and demand Informations.
OKej my request. "There are only two Severitus fics I know of that manage to keep Snape from becoming Mother of the Year and Harry from being a spineless puddle of goo, so we will see how my attempt goes" Can you give me a links to this Severitusów?
Fantastic story! I hope you willl update soon!
Title: Chapter 14
| 07 Jan 2010 1:06 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow sorry I haven't reviewed enough as I have read but I have been racing through the story it is so good. I love haow you portray the characters it's AU but unlike a lot of sickly sweet stories yours is believable! Thank you so much for your wonderful writing
I actually can see why you're less happy with this chapter than with others, but I think that's the nature of aftermath chapters rather than this chapter being lower quality. It's superb at doing what it has to and keeping us tied into the story. I felt a great rush of pity for Malfoy, who I'm not all that fond of, and I wanted to rush in there and try to help. It's very well written.
Title: Chapter 14
| 04 Jan 2010 2:45 am
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Reviewer: katie (Anonymous)
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you are a fantastic writer! every one is perfectly in character. I hope to see more of this fic soon!
Wow. What happened to Luna? I hope that she's still in there, that she still has her mind. I hope that she will be okay, and Draco too. What a mess Harry is in, I feel certain that he will mess up around Draco at some point.
Great chapter! thank you for the update!
Title: Chapter 14
| 02 Jan 2010 1:41 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Thanks for updating!! I simply adore this story. Happy New Year!
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