Creo que la última actualización fue hace años, pero la historia está súper bien, de verdad, me ha enganchado muchísimo, incluso más que los apuntes que tengo que estudiar para mi examen de mañana. Espero que algún día la puedas continuar porque está genial, de verdad.
I know this was last updated ages ago, but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed it, & the characterisation of a frustratingly hot-headed Harry (so pretty accurate). Thank you for writing, and I would be Thrilled if you one day continue.
| Title: Chapter 29
| 30 Mar 2020 2:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Hermione was angling towards the basilisk in the chamber of secrets if you ask me and the diary thing so maybe she was saying something about how he killed the basilisk...maybe... Either way, Snape and lupin are keeping too much from Harry and yet expecting him to act according to their expectations. It's like telling someone to pin the tail on the donkey, but blindfolding them in the middle of a road-- what house is in it? What wall is it on? Is anyone there to give instructions? Throw the boy a bone! (Shouting at Snape and lupin not the author lol) and I wish we knew was lupin was supposedly dying of
| Title: Chapter 27
| 30 Mar 2020 11:45 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Harry doesn't even argue or get angry when Snape enters his mind anymore -- kinda sucks. Snape will never admit he's in the wrong but it made me feel better when Harry fought it a bit even if it was a losing battle. Lupin is an arse hole and Snape is all nice all of a sudden-- really creepy! And Snape saying that the vaults were money the order could've used?! Dude that's Harry's money! Get your greedy mitts off
| Title: Chapter 16
| 30 Mar 2020 6:38 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I really truly hope Hermione is not going with Draco because I just do not like that pairing at all. Draco is a good guy I mean but I just do not like Hermione
| Title: Chapter 15
| 30 Mar 2020 6:14 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Uhoh I have a feeling that bronze goblet was keeping Harry Harry but without it he's becoming more Hadrian
| Title: Chapter 11
| 30 Mar 2020 5:18 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I would be super pissed at both Snape and lupin because they are terrible for Harry's mental state right now. he is depressed and hurt and blaming himself for everything and they are not making it better at all
why do I get the feeling that this is not a polyjuice potion but rather some sort of potion to remove a glamour or something and this is harrys real face
I really loved your story. It is interesting, well written and totally engrossing. Excellent job!
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