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Title: Chapter 29 31 Dec 2013 6:52 am
Reviewer: Lemondrop07 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow such a great chapter! I have some questions about hermoines gift, does she know about Harry wanting to test the chamber of secrets to see if he can still speak in parsletongue? Also what if hermoine charmed the diary so that she could see everything harry writes and can respond like tom riddle in the chamber of secrets book? Is that why hermoine wants harry to use it so they can communicate without anyone interfering or eavesdropping? An my final question, does hermoine suspect Hadrian to be harry?
Title: Chapter 29 21 Nov 2013 5:50 am
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I started reading this story over the summer and have been enjoying it. I hope you are still writing. I see that there was a year gap in updates before I started reading. I hope you will continue and not wait another year. Well thought out story. Well written. Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I do have a chapter that's almost ready. I'm just a little busy with exams and the holidays right now. Hopefully I'll have it posted over the weekend.
Title: Chapter 29 02 Nov 2013 1:17 am
Reviewer: Blink (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really can't wait for the next chapter..!
    This story is great and original :)
Title: Chapter 29 12 Oct 2013 9:21 am
Reviewer: manx (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I look forward to seeing the charms on Harry fail!
Title: Chapter 24 12 Oct 2013 9:17 am
Reviewer: manx (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry is an idiot thinking he can run to Lupin and get to whine about Snape not trusting him after Harry has lied to Lupin. Heh what did he expect...
Title: Chapter 29 07 Oct 2013 6:13 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Signed) [Report This]
    As always, I enjoyed the chapter. I thought that it was interesting that Harry felt so much better when he first woke up. I'm sorry that Snape didn't seem to realize how upset Harry is about the possibility of being a horcrux.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    He does realize it, but there isn't much he can do about it. Harry will not simply take his word for it, because there isn't enough trust between them for that. Harry is refusing to look at the evidence Snape is offering to provide (every time Snape tells him to talk to Dumbledore's portrait, Harry refuses). Harry hasn't told him what evidence he has for being convinced he is still a horcrux, and Snape can't make an argument against something he doesn't know, so nothing he says is going to actually make a difference, because Harry is always going to be thinking he knows better because he knows something Snape doesn't know. There's just nothing else Snaoe can do, at the moment.

Title: Chapter 29 06 Oct 2013 11:19 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the blue writing spelled out a message not sure what it was perhaps a way to communicate using the diary. Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: Yes. It was a collection of words that reference the Chamber of Secrets and Tom Riddle's diary.
Title: Chapter 29 06 Oct 2013 6:45 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OOh, another chapter! I get excited when I see the alerts!

    I am confused about one thing though. Did Lupin send Harry a gift after all? That was a little unclear.

    Okay, when will Snape and Lupin find out that Harry's magic is back and back in full force. I 'm dying for Snape to know that Harry learnt the spell that Draco couldn't! Can't wait to see his face!!

    Poor Harry though. He just doesn't trust adults at all. I just hope that he doesn't do something stupid and that Snape intercepts him before he does.

    I am also confused about what Hermione was trying to do. Maybe I'm slow, but I have no idea, other than thinking that she again is trying to hint at Harry that she knows that he is really Hadrian.

    I can't wait till the next update!!! You are killing me here, with these cliffies!

    Omg!! I just thought of something.

    If Harry uses the diary and only someone who is blood related can read it, Snape will be able to read it. She is try ing to prove that Hadrian is Harry and not really Snape's son.

    Does that include the little note too? Maybe she thinks that Snape won't be able to read the note because Harry is Hadrian andshe thinks that Hadrian is not really Snape's son. Okay, I'm rambling here. But maybe Harry will use the same logic eventually and realise that Snape was able to read it, meaning that he is Harry's father.

    Okay, I'm rambling! lol That is because I'm on eggshells here to know what happens next. I want so much for Harry to find out that he is really Snape's son.

    Oh and curious also, how did Snape find out that Harry is really his son?

    Sorry about the novel. Can't wait for the next update.

    Author's Response:

    Lupin sent him the Map, which is what he had promised to give him.

    Harry has never had any adult in his life that he could trust. Well, there was Sirius, for a while, but to me their relationship was almost a reversed one, in a way, with Harry worrying about (rather than relying on) Sirius. It's unfortunate that the adults in his life don't realize that a lot of what Harry does that drives them crazy actually stems from his inability to confide in adults or trust that adults are doing something that's in his best interest.

    Harry will figure out (sort of) Hermione's gift in the next chapter. She does suspect that Hadrian is Harry, but she is nowhere close to considering the possibility of Snape really being his father. Your ideas about her gift are exellent!

    Snape found out about Harry being his son after Dumbledore's death left him basically in charge of everything to do with Harry.

    Thanks for reviewing, that was awesome!

Title: Chapter 29 06 Oct 2013 8:24 am
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I have another thought. Perhaps it is the stationary that Ginny sent that Harry needs to write on with the blue ink. The Order ignored Ginny's stationary focusing on the Diary Hermoine sent along which she clearly knew and intended for them to notice and remove the charms.

    Ok, now the next chapter needs to come out quickly as I want to know the answer.

    Mary
Title: Chapter 29 06 Oct 2013 8:14 am
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying your story. I discovered it a few weeks ago and it is very well written.

    I am guessing that the blue ink has been charmed so that what ever Harry writes with the blue ink will duplicate itself in a book that Hermoine has.

    Guess number 2 is that the library book that Hermoine sent along is actually the book that has been charmed to work similar to Riddles Diary and that the Diary was there for the Order to find and remove the charms thus ignoring the library book.

    Or a combination of the two. Harry has to write in the library book using the blue ink.

    Well it has been fun guessing. I am looking forward to future chapters to find out if I am right.

    Great Story.

    Mary

    Author's Response:  All really excellent ideas! I knew readers would figure it out way before Harry will. :-)

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