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Reviews For For The Boy Who Has Everything
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Author's Response: Thanks! Harry has been feeling for a while already like everyone has been taken away from him, but he's not exactly ready to admit that if Snape dies there really isn't anyone who can take him in. He definitely wants to cling to the hope that Lupin or the Weasleys could take care of him until he is of age, but he's starting to come to terms with the possibility that they just can't. Also, he finally recognizes that Snape is important to other people (people Harry cares about). That's a step forward, considering that not long ago he saw Snape only as an obstacle or a source of irritation. Well, Snape is not sure what will happen, which would, of course, drive him crazy. Since he can't find the reason Harry is having problems in the first place, he feels like anything could happen. That's stressful. He is relatively sure it will happen on Harry's birthday (like Lupin explained to Harry, birthdays are magical milestones), so his way of trying to prepare for whatever might happen is to keep a close eye on Harry. He can't be TOO concerned, though, since he's still splitting his attention between Harry and a potion that's in another room (he could have put the cauldron in his quarters instead of in his office, if he really thought Harry was in any danger). He probably just wants to make sure "Hadrian" doesn't go walking around the castle with eyes that are suddenly bright green, or something.
Author's Response: Oh, he's aware Harry was neglected. He just doesn't recognize that it's important. To him, neglect just doesn't rank very high on the list of things to whine and complain about, especially once you're out of that situation. Harry has a completely different understanding of what is and isn't worthy of getting upset about. He cares a lot more about being unloved and unwanted than he does about being starved or hit. So, when he tries to explain, he picks the exact things Snape calls "whining" instead of things that would actually set off some alarms for Snape. He also has an unfortunate way of blurting things out in a flippant or sarcastic sort of way, which makes Snape dismiss his words because he focuses on the "disrespectful" tone Harry uses toward him. It all leads to a big miscommunication going on between them, with Harry trying to articulate how unloved and unwanted he felt at the Dursleys (because that's the thing that was the worst about living with them, in his mind), and Snape thinking, "There he goes again, whining about not getting the latest and greatest toys for his birthday and complaining about the gifts he did get... ungrateful brat!" Then Snape makes some sneering comment and Harry just shuts down. Yes, that's what I was going for with Lupin. Mean, but not intellectually impaired (because that would be pretty useless). Thanks for reviewing!
I am very impatient now for Harry to find out that he is Snape's son. I woudl have thought that he would have been suspicious of the Paternity test that Fudge took, but Harry wasn't even suspicious about it. I can't wait till that moment though. Love this story and so happy that you've continued!! Author's Response: Aww, sorry your review got erased! I hate when I type something and then it just vanished on me. I can never remember exactly what I wrote the first time! Harry just lets the important things whoosh over his head and latches on to some minor thing, and then gets so preoccupied with the minor thing that even standing in front of him with a megaphone wouldn't wake him up to the fact that there's something else that desperately needs his attention. In his defense, he can't be expected to know how everything in the magical world works, so he can sort of be excused for taking the word of adults when they claim that something is a certain way. Until given another reason to think about it, he has dismissed it as not important. If it ever occurs to him to suspect that he might be Snape's real son, he will probably remember the potion and hatch some idiotic plot to brew it in a filthy, haunted bathroom, even if it takes ten months to brew and even if the readers can think of at least twenty better and faster ways he could have achieved the same goal. And then, after all that, it will probably turn out to be the wrong potion, too. Well, we're just sort of slogging through the multiple birthdays right now. It's really slow going for some reason, and I'm impatient too, because there are a lot of interesting things that will happen later (action! danger! betrayal! death!) and I want to get to them. I want the pace to pick up, but the birthdays are really important to the plot. I'm glad you're enjoying it! My beta is truly awesome and we are getting so much done. She doesn't mind if I send her chapters in chunks or if I send them out of order, she has better ideas that me most of the time, and she isn't afraid to disagree with me. I think the next chapter will be out either on the weekend or early next week.
And wow! Snape was almost nice to Harry! Wonders never cease! Loved the part with the patronus! Can't wait to see Harry's reaction if he finds out to whom that patronus had once belonged! Enjoyed the read....can't wait for the next! Author's Response: Thanks! There should be another chapter maybe over the weekend or early next week. I'm sorry your first review vanished... I hate when that happens to me! I can never remember what I wrote and the second attempt never sounds the same.
There's a few stories that I've kept track of in the hope that they might be finished one day, it's so nice that yours is continuing. Thank you. I look forward to the next part! Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far. I definitely enjoy writing it.
Author's Response: Harry's not a horcrux anymore, so it's just his own thought, but he is under the influence of several things that make his thoughts not exactly like his normal thoughts.
This is exactly what happens! I'm amazed to see it in print! You are a brilliant author! "I'm sorry you don't agree with his assessment of you. I have always gone to great lengths to defend you, since I believe your positive traits far outweigh the negative ones. But don't you DARE --" Lupin suddenly brought his hand thunderously down on the top of the desk, making Harry leap back as the platter of scones and tarts clattered to the floor. He dropped his voice to a harsh whisper. "Don't you dare come in here and expect me to disagree with him after taking advantage of my trust." His normally warm amber eyes, now like smoldering coals, bore into Harry's. "I left Hermione the book, since I see no way of keeping half a dozen teenagers from getting their hands on another copy. I could Obliviate the lot of them... but that is too much like what the Ministry is currently doing, and I would be concerned about what that spell would do to Luna's fragile state of mind. But don't you dare --" Lupin took out his wand and pointed it at Harry's chest. "-- come in here and talk to me about how trustworthy you are." I'm highly impressed that you have Remus taking this stance and not just patting Harry on the head and fluffing over his misdeeds. Although, I *do* wonder if Remus can maintain this attitude because Harry is disguised as Hadrian, instead of looking like Harry Potter, when he says it.
Author's Response: Thanks! Don't hate Ron and the twins. Even Harry admits to himself that he would have been horrible to Hadrian. They haven't actually done anything to him, yet, and Harry has no real evidence that it's him they're plotting against. In the next few chapters Harry and Ron will get to have a private conversation and readers will get to see what's been going on behind the scenes for Ron. It's too easy to forget that Harry isn't the only one having a miserable time.
Anyway, I am worried about what the Weasleys are up to and worried that they are trying to frame Harry with the book's disappearance. Curious to see what happens next. Author's Response: Ooh, great guess! Harry will be afraid that's what they're up to, too. He's getting really paranoid, not knowing what they're up to. The jinx on DADA always had the quality of a runaway rumor. Everyone knows about it, but no one is exactly sure what it does, other than make it impossible for anyone to teach longer than a year. Malfoy doesn't have the whole story either, of course, he's just retelling the version of the rumor that he knows. The jinx is real, but if even Dumbledore couldn't remove it, how can anyone (who isn't Voldemort) say they know the truth? Harry's guess is as good as anyone else's when it comes to Lupin being in danger or not. I've been interested in the jinx for a long time. It's one of those things that are kind of slippery. Just when you think you have an idea about how it would work, you remember something else and it wrecks your theory. I wrote an little essay about it once, but ended up not posting it because it was incomplete. I think I'll dust it off and post it on my lj now that I remember it. |
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