Title: Chapter 4: Prelude to Disaster
| 30 Dec 2005 6:09 pm
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Reviewer: Roxie (Anonymous)
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I've been reading this story for a while now. I just wanted to tell you that I think it's absolutely awesome. You write REALLY well. I'm reviewing because I found this last paragraph especially poignant.
I love the rest of this story so far, but that one line: "......Severus had to fight down the panic that rose inside him. Harry had become the son he'd never risked having, not when any child of his would have been pledged to the Dark Lord from the moment of its birth."
I just... I don't know. It makes sense to me now, and that paragraph just felt so... I don't know. You're fabulous, though. I hope you keep writing this, even though HBP had been out for a while. I would love to see this finished. It's awesome. Really.